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Tags: no words
where is that one?
...

naked,

totally exposed.

mist rises from hot breath

meeting cold air.

my pussy steams 

as I walk streets 

empty of you

and seek someone 

to drink my hot soul.

there are no fingers 

to slide over my sex 

and bring me home. 

no mouth to draw wet circles 

over longing flesh. 

no voice to growl my name.

so I just walk,

exposed.

...

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Comments(23)

Chanel
Posted 24 Jan 2014 15:34
Those few words speak volumes. Bitter sweet and sexy.
oneway
Posted 09 Jan 2014 11:44
In so few words, you say so much. Some would give you a hard cock and a big load. I would offer long deep kisses and love that doesn't stop with my cum. True sex is not being there, but getting there that is wonderful. And getting there is better even after one has cum. Sharing your bed after we made love would be a very pleasent time indeed. You make me feel a part of your poems, almost as if you are thinking of me.
mare24
Posted 14 Dec 2013 22:59
Mmmm steamy!
ArtMan
Posted 13 Dec 2013 16:02
Beautiful, sensual, & wonderfully erotic!!!
beowulf69
Posted 11 Dec 2013 19:45
Brilliant expression!!
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 07 Dec 2013 13:00
Wonderful!!! 5+

VanGogh
Posted 06 Dec 2013 23:06
A great poet does expose, share and evoke emotions ... you do all that so very well!

SydneySider
Posted 04 Dec 2013 04:09
Perfection. Short, needy, emotional, to the point. What more does a reader need. Nothing short of your normal brilliance to see here.
HK4167
Posted 03 Dec 2013 22:51
Simply wonderful...your words are so sensual yet powerful...
Alphamagus
Posted 03 Dec 2013 21:11
Easily my favourite Lush author...........Incredible!! xx

ShyVixen
Posted 03 Dec 2013 14:09
Sigh... Powerfully written. It's almost painful to read, yet your words are so passionate I find myself reading it over and over again.

DLizze
Posted 02 Dec 2013 21:29
Sometimes all we can do is just keep putting one foot in front of the other. Here's a hug, for what it's worth (((())))
rosesrred
Posted 02 Dec 2013 20:31
Everything that you write inspires me! It's so senual and beautiful 5+

alexmarch
Posted 02 Dec 2013 19:48
Oh, if only I could tell you what your poems do to me!

Buz
Posted 02 Dec 2013 19:12
Totally tremendous. You achieved so much with so few words. Perfect words, perfect placement!
syzygy
Posted 02 Dec 2013 10:42
sad and lovely. I love "seek someone to drink my hot soul." nicely done.

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billybroadband
Posted 02 Dec 2013 10:38
wonderful
Mobius_NR
Posted 02 Dec 2013 06:38
Wow... How vivid!

Strangerlyd
Posted 02 Dec 2013 05:51
Wow, excellent writing...

Mysteria27
Posted 02 Dec 2013 04:25
Lovely writing. Sensual and erotic thoughts. Beautiful. 5
nazhinaz
Posted 02 Dec 2013 04:24
What a lonely feel. 5

delsmith
Posted 02 Dec 2013 04:08
Deep and sensual stirring so many feelings.
bill11
Posted 02 Dec 2013 03:34
Oh, so very sensual and exciting the thoughts and emotions
 

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