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Bare
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Kiki

Bare


Uncovered from mesmerizing voice
From sharp protecting tongue
Refrained from words of meaning

A soul not recognized by self
A heart eagerly fed on illusions
A body responding to another one's fingers

Bare

Nothing to burn
Nothing to clean
As there is nothing left...

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Comments(14)

Illegalsmile
Posted 09 Apr 2013 15:56
Somehow,
I had missed your work. I have discovered a treasure!
HK4167
Posted 02 Feb 2013 22:20
Wow...just wow...
Piquet
Posted 14 Jan 2013 02:48
Laconic and beautiful Moon ! Just heavenly.
ArtMan
Posted 26 Dec 2012 19:31
Wonderful & exceptional.
Michael
Posted 23 Dec 2012 03:47
"Bare"... my first thought was naked, then I quickly realized "Bare" speaks of our heart stripped of all pretense and left without defense. How vulnerable we are to deceit when our heart is "eagerly fed on illusions.

Succinctly worded!

Buz
Posted 22 Dec 2012 21:48
Brilliant writing!
underthehood
Posted 22 Dec 2012 20:30
Short with strong content. Words though less are conveying a lot of bare emotions ... Beautiful !! And welcome back
Warlock
Posted 22 Dec 2012 15:55
Very stark.. and very graphic emotionally..

Kal-El85
Posted 22 Dec 2012 14:31
Enjoyed this greatly; short, but sweet and very profound.

principessa
Posted 22 Dec 2012 07:49
So powerful and profound. It should not be possible in so few words, but you have done it and are blooming once more. xxx
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 22 Dec 2012 06:52
wow again.
Alphamagus
Posted 22 Dec 2012 06:51
Just Wow hunnie xxxxx
nazhinaz
Posted 22 Dec 2012 06:03
" A heart eagerly fed on illusions". wow. Great phrase. Love to look up to moon for poetic expression. 5

TheGulfCoaster
Posted 22 Dec 2012 05:45
Moon, I loved it! You manage to say so much with so few words. So glad to see you back, you were missed!
 

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