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Beautifully Broken

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I have been delicately fractured, Exquisitely torn.
I am smiling and crying and recognizing
Everything as it is.

I am so beautifully broken
I am so sweetly taken apart
And I love you just for being.

I will live in separate pieces
'Til I grow back together
I am beautifully broken
I will gently mend

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Comments(8)

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 20 Mar 2013 18:12
lovely images

Echelon
Posted 20 Feb 2013 13:20
thank you all so much for your kind words. shanee - i hope your friend is doing ok and that she can take some comfort in the poem. E xx

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Saga
Posted 17 Feb 2013 18:18
Short, intense and beautiful.
HK4167
Posted 15 Feb 2013 21:50
simple, short but so beautiful....well done
Shanee108
Posted 15 Feb 2013 21:11
i love it! And if You don't mind i'd like to share this with a friend of mine who just broke up with her boyfriend. It says so much, so exquisitely in such a concise way that is is devastatingly beautiful. Please write more!

ShyVixen
Posted 15 Feb 2013 15:58
So simple yet so moving. Lovely.
2706ali
Posted 15 Feb 2013 15:30
Such an impact ,short and poignant and so powerfull
Roxanna
Posted 15 Feb 2013 15:15
I feel the melancholy and the hope in every word. Beautifully expressed.
 

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