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May everyone have someone who is an inspiration, be that person for someone else, or both.

Because of you, in so many ways —
I am stronger...I am better.
No longer am I weak and tethered;
Your acquaintance released my fetter.

~

Your quick wit makes me laugh;
...I am happier.

Your unfailing support bolsters me;
...I am more confident.

Your gentle advice nudges me;
...I am more productive.

Your unerring perception enlightens me;
...I am healthier.

Your faithful love empowers me;
...I am more trusting.

Your quiet encouragement ameliorates me;
...I am more patient.

~

Better than you? Ridiculous,
Absurd, and patently untrue.
Indisputable, however, is that
I am a better me...because of you.

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Comments(19)

meredith
Posted 18 Oct 2013 13:58
Everyone needs someone at sometime. Conversely we should help those around us. Well put.
SITTING
Posted 14 May 2012 05:07
Loved it! I don't know what else to say! I just loved every word, and simply cannot do it justice with my comment...I just...loved it!

CuriousButterfly
Posted 06 May 2012 07:52
very inspiring..loved it
SecretDesire
Posted 06 May 2012 02:12
Excellent and Inspirational... Love it and thank you for sharing.
Coco
Posted 04 May 2012 05:39
That is truly wonderful and it made me think of someone. I will be certain to have him read it as well. Soulful and inspirational!
HK4167
Posted 03 May 2012 12:34
Wonderful piece. Simple, short but so beautifully written with such lovely feelings. Great work.

stephanie
Posted 02 May 2012 14:20
Simply Rather Lovely..... (You Softie!)

A deserved FIVE!!! (And a MWAH!)

xx SF

Frank_Lee
Posted 02 May 2012 09:14
Beautiful. An automatic 5. It's like you opened a door to a feeling we all know, and yet sometimes we need a little help to remember. Thank you!

SweetPenny
Posted 02 May 2012 07:30
Beautiful!
ArtMan
Posted 02 May 2012 06:47
Wonderful writing!

DLizze
Posted 01 May 2012 20:27
Very nice, Maggie - and what we all want to find. Not someone who completes us, or who makes us whole, but who makes us better.

VanGogh
Posted 01 May 2012 19:37
absolutely wonderful!!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 01 May 2012 18:38
i love this.... that is what we always want.... the one who makes us better...

principessa
Posted 01 May 2012 17:57
The one we all want to find. Good work, M1.

Shylass
Posted 01 May 2012 17:11
I proper envy you! Wonderful!

AngelHeart01
Posted 01 May 2012 16:51
Inspiration ... makes me smile. But the "Better me", is priceless.

Dudealicious
Posted 01 May 2012 16:09
Very nice work, simplistic but very thoughtful. Thank-you very much for sharing!
etairay
Posted 01 May 2012 15:58
omg THANK YOU!! you couldnt have said it more BETTER goin to have him read it too THANK YOU!

clum
Posted 01 May 2012 15:15
This really speaks to me, M1. Thank you for coming up with the words I couldn't.
 

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