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Reflections on a relationship.
I hear the words but they don't sink in.
My mind can't hold what you're saying.
Feeling the years, I'm holding back tears.
You're putting a voice to my worst fears.
Days used to be brighter and we could laugh at time.
Years have gone, we're getting on, being old's a crime.

Life burns out in a smoky haze,
It gets shorter as the memories fade.
One door closes, another one shuts,
Banalities fall like cigarette butts.

We'll look back and recall this day,
Nothing left but a worn cliché.
Pretending that there's no regrets,
We'll be lying, you don't forget.
Days used to be brighter and we could laugh at time.
Years have gone, we're getting on, being old's a crime.
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Alexandra_A
Posted 18 Aug 2013 02:13
Banalities fall like cigarette butts

What a wonderful line. Great poem, Jack

Jayne33
Posted 17 Aug 2013 16:28
Really great writing. I think the topic is one that everyone has been through at one point in time. You capture the feeling with your words perfectly. Easy 5
LustyV
Posted 17 Aug 2013 16:25
Great job Jack. As always. your subject was very true . You've always had such a way with words.

Mysteria27
Posted 17 Aug 2013 11:09
I liked your poem. You can feel your words and they are very intense. Things like that happen. Very real. Excellent writing. 5

VanGogh
Posted 17 Aug 2013 10:49
Oh how real!! Very well written, Jack. Thank you so much for sharing.
 

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