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Broke Wing Bird

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She’s a foreign country

I never got back from

Wandering in blind desperation

Searching for a breath of air

That touched her once and flew away

I am everything hollow that crumbles

Aching arms in empty circles

Around the raw delicacy

Of accidental dancing

I love her for the broke wing bird

She is in the cage of herself

For the way the air rains jewels

Every time she laughs

For the constellation of heat

That burns in the space between our skin

When our bodies touch

All down the length of us

And I will be this same kind of exile

Long after we have become smoke

And the last departing star

Shuts off the light

Leaving me down here

To love her with every scar on my heart.

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Comments(10)


Naughtygrl73
Posted 07 Aug 2012 02:15
I adore the last line Frank,

'To love her with every scar on my heart'

its perfect
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 05 Aug 2012 18:47
Very beautiful Frank!

Shylass
Posted 04 Aug 2012 07:34
Every line is a galaxy of new worlds for my head to explore.
AngelHeart01
Posted 03 Aug 2012 22:39
Beautiful
velvety
Posted 03 Aug 2012 17:11
Wow! Deep emotions beautifully expressed.
Kal-El85
Posted 03 Aug 2012 14:50
Beautiful as always, Frank.

LatinSugar
Posted 03 Aug 2012 14:03
I cannot chose a favorite verse, for the complete piece is exquisite.
One of your finest. Hermosa palabras...beautiful words.
sweetvictory
Posted 03 Aug 2012 09:54
What vivid imagery. Beautiful and full of such tangible emotions.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 02 Aug 2012 21:54
this one is about more than i can bear... mr. lee.. you.... you... "every scar of my heart....
Lisa
Posted 02 Aug 2012 21:39
This is a really wonderful poem. I stopped a few times to go back and read some of the lines a second time. These were my favourite two:


"For the constellation of heat

That burns in the space between our skin"
 

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