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My first poem... hopefully it's not too bad. Thanks for reading!

My eyes are welling up with tears
Which begin streaming down my face
Enveloping me with all my fears
Reminding me how bitter life can really taste.

As time goes by
The days seem to drag on,
I tell myself that I’ve got to try
And to give myself a reason to go on.

Darkness surrounds my soul
And envelops my fragile heart,
This pain is taking quite a toll
Preventing me from find my broken part.

The light tries to shine on me
But I block it out with all my hate.
I need to fight my evils and set myself free
If only it wasn’t too late.

Hugging my knees close to my chest
The tears still flowing free,
Knowing that my heart has been laid to rest
I now know I’ve forever lost a part of me.

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Posted 26 Feb 2011 20:11
Oh thats sad, But it is well written
Posted 26 Feb 2011 09:17
Wow, that was well done. Makes me sad though.
Posted 26 Feb 2011 04:30
Ah thanks for the comments guys I really appreciate it & I wouldn't exactly say I'm heartbroken, just a mix of emotions going on.
Posted 26 Feb 2011 01:04
That's a lovely poem , so sad and heartwrenching . Why is it that heartbreak brings out the poet in us ?

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