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There is never just one line...
How her heart breaks
Like the broken wings
Of a sad little butterfly
She is fragile
And needs his arms around her
Like a shield against the pain
But he is gone
Lost to her in another life
Another world
Where she can never intrude

She reaches for him;
In the arms of so many others
But they cannot fill the void
Can never fix the broken shell of her heart
They could never mend
What he took from her
Though she seeks it every day

She gave it up way back then
She gave it to him
When she crumbled to dust
And whether he knew it or not
He took it with him when he left
Her heart,
Her soul,
Her love

She became a ghost
Transparent Invisible
Trying to live
Trying to be free
Of a past that left her lessened;
Left her sad
Left her alone and
In a molten sea of bittersweet despair

She thought time had buried the delicate ache
Had shred down the disappointed longing
And she had decided long ago
To let go of the hurt
To forgive and accept
But a moment and a memory returns
Touches her
And again she is on her knees

Heart in hand
And lost
He has that piece of her
That makes her whole


Please give it back...

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Posted 02 Dec 2013 12:52
This poem and the next one look like they were born from your own personal hurt. I grieve for you and with you. I hope you find true love that lasts and someone cares for you. I follow you as kushiel as well. If you and I do become friends here, I hope we also become FB friends and just get to talk person to person.
Posted 27 Oct 2013 18:05
Intense heartbroken emotions very well expressed in this piece...amazing, simply amazing.
Posted 18 Oct 2013 00:22
Thank you to everyone for your kind comments on a piece of work I find to be less than deserving. I guess it hurts when old memories or worse, old feelings are brought to the surface and we are reminded that though forgiven, its never ever truly forgotten xxx

Posted 17 Oct 2013 16:48
This is a very powerful and intense poem. I could feel all your pain, sadness, anguish. This is a beautiful poem. Lovely writing. Beautiful. 5

Posted 17 Oct 2013 11:31
This is raw and harrowingly beautiful. And enviable. Eloquence was never in anyone's words, but in the hearts of those who read them and ache.

Posted 17 Oct 2013 10:03
it's so hard to comment on your Works of Arts .... because to say "beautiful" or "excellent" is bland compared to the heartfelt emotion I feel when I read your Words. It's like the feel of .... oh damn, nothing gives it the accolades it warrants. Thank you again, for blessing us with your Work.

Posted 17 Oct 2013 09:59
Beautiful poem, To let go, forgive and accept is the hardest...
Posted 17 Oct 2013 09:46
This is excellent ...
Posted 17 Oct 2013 09:42
The expression of love lost is so profound
Posted 17 Oct 2013 09:06
Love lost is life regained. (paradise lost & Paradise regained by Milton). 5

Posted 17 Oct 2013 07:44
I agree with what has been said ,,,, a 5 barely does this justice.
Posted 17 Oct 2013 07:26
i wish i could give this a million.

Posted 17 Oct 2013 07:19
This was a very intense and moving poem. I could feel the hurt behind your words, it felt very sincere and raw. I love it.

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