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Broken-Repair

Broken - Repair


I wasn’t always miserable as you can probably see,
there once was a boy in my life that was very important to me.

We started out as friends and slowly began to fall,
 but as it turns out our love was fairly small.
 
I finally got enough courage to tell him how I felt,
He responded to my feelings and with that I surely melt.
 
I felt like the luckiest girl in the world living a care free life,
hoping someday I would become his one and only wife.
 
There came a day when I thought we would go to college together,
It turns out he lied about being together forever.
 
He promised me a house, a husband, and child.
In the end he became vile.
 
I loved him with all my heart and asked him why?
Last thing he would ever tell me was good bye.
 
I gave him everything.
He promised to take care of me and his child,
when I reminded him he just laughed and smiled.
 
He said I was gullible and stupid;
it wasn’t my fault I was hit by cupid.
 
He moved away without anything to say,
I cried for a month in the cold, cold May.
 
I never heard from him throughout college,
he was living somewhere in faraway Holland.
 
When we were older I ran into him in the street,
there was still tension and heat.
 
He looked miserable almost as miserable as I was,
when I asked him why he just said cause.
 
I invited him back to my home to let him come and see
his child,
and for the first time since then, I actually saw him smile.
 
He told me he made a mistake and never got me out of his head,
that night he stayed and laid with me in bed.
 
We woke up the next morning he was smiling and looking down at me;
we got up and talked for hours while drinking green tea.
 
Now you know how we are,
we will never ever be very far.
 
We will love each other forever and ever,
fight or leave each other?

Absolutely Never!

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Comments(9)

Alphamagus
Posted 02 May 2012 20:13
What a lovely heartfelt piece. Great!
underthehood
Posted 18 Jan 2012 05:13
Raw and very moving emotions. Great work. Thanks for sharing !
Piquet
Posted 18 Jan 2012 04:21
Awww, I'm glad this had a happy ending. Well Done !

Buz
Posted 17 Jan 2012 04:51
This is really great emotional work Irish girl!

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Milik_The_Red
Posted 17 Jan 2012 03:00
I feel every dripping word you wrote as if it laid me bare. It wounds one so deeply when betrayed because we care. I have no words of wisdom, no balm to ease your pain. There is nothing I can say. The only relief I offer is written on this page. We share the bitter taste and for me it burns today. I wish for you much better and hope for you the day will toll To find someone who is worthy of your deep and special soul.
nazhinaz
Posted 16 Jan 2012 23:03
Enjoyed the poetic expression of a love filled story.
SecretDesire
Posted 16 Jan 2012 22:51
True love never dies.. if lost, it always find it's way back. Your emotion shines through every line. Loved this line ... "He said I was gullible and stupid; it wasn't my fault I was hit by cupid". Brilliant writing .... well done.
mickeyfinn1
Posted 16 Jan 2012 21:34
written from your heart..full of emotion....a happy ending?
Makavelli
Posted 16 Jan 2012 19:51
Great job! I love the emotion and flow of your poem! Thanks for sharing!
 

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