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Burn Baby Burn
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Kiki

Burn Baby Burn

Bonded by words,
We ignited this fire...
Smooth soothing flames
That warmed and comforted us,
Like a blanket under the starlit sky

Fueled by inner storms,
The inferno tore us apart
And chased us away...

Enough...

Today I am back, willing to face the flames and burn my fears
Today I look my demons in the eye and scorch them...

I see you through the flames on the other side...
You're here...
Your skin golden from the glow of the fire,
Your eyes smoldering through the flames...
In trance, piercing into my soul

Demons burn and lurk..
Inviting us to come closer
While the moon spreads her light
And the stars show paths of what is to come...

Heated fear...
Is pouring out of bodies
Words once so promising,
Die an eternal death.
Poems pulsating with passion,
Show their true colour now that the varnish is burned off.

The flames rake higher,
Sheltering my hoarse voice...
Frustration from being connected and separated
By these raging flames...

We move & dance, bodies glowing,
The distance between us remains,
Until: we have challenged every last part of darkness,
Every demon has been vanquished,
We can walk these glowing embers,
And face our biggest fear...

Together...

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Comments(11)

curious3045
Posted 18 Feb 2014 07:48
Beautifully written It pulls you into it and makes you think about yourself and the real feelings you have Great job...
Piquet
Posted 14 Jan 2013 03:03
Beautifully written Moon. Your powers of expression are alive and alight in this one. Excellent poem !
Michael
Posted 13 Jan 2013 11:31
You have some wonderful phrases here... 'stars show paths of what is to come' is my favorite.
Likewise you have captured the intensity of enraptured attraction, and how once burned thru could become something stronger. Once the 'varnish has burned off' does allow us to see each other in unshielded light, exposing ourselves as we truly are. I wonder if the bigger fear is being alone... or the exposure of being together.
Excellent!!!
ArtMan
Posted 12 Jan 2013 19:32
Wonderful and very powerful!!! 5+
underthehood
Posted 12 Jan 2013 01:15
'Today I look my demons in the eyes and scorch them' . Loved the attitude !!

principessa
Posted 06 Jan 2013 12:14
Powerful and cathartic.
spearone
Posted 06 Jan 2013 10:51
Magnificent!

Kal-El85
Posted 06 Jan 2013 06:25
Terrific, just terrific; Moon.
Alphamagus
Posted 06 Jan 2013 05:21
So heartfelt and breathtaking. Wow!! xx

Buz
Posted 05 Jan 2013 20:08
Outstanding writing! Your words jump off the screen (or page) and are perfect. Excellent!
ArtAngel
Posted 05 Jan 2013 17:34
Excellent...wow!!! Every word touched me..bravo!!
 

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