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Saga

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You try to hang on to your control.
I can see it in your eyes:
The urge to just take,
To claim what is rightfully yours.

Your piercing blue eyes deepen
As I see you clenching your fists.
You don't want to wait,
Your patience with me is running thin.

I keep teasing,
I keep pushing,
I want to see you shatter.
Will you lose control over your precious calm?

You make me blush under your gaze,
Your intense eyes watching my every move.
I know what you are thinking;
I can see it in your seductive smile.

I look at you from veiled lashes.
I am trying to hide what I so desperately want.
But inside me, my lust is growing,
Screaming to feel your touch.

I am fighting to stay in control,
This game I have started to play,
And I am quickly losing.
I simply crave you.

I need to feel your hands claiming my body,
Your tongue tasting every part of me.
I want to feel your bite on my skin,
That dangerous line between pain and ecstasy.

I watch as you lean across the table,
Grabbing a handful of my hair,
Whispering your deep, dark desires,
"This will not be tender,
This will not be slow.”
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Comments(19)


Tashtego
Posted 29 Mar 2013 22:15
I love the theme. Trying to stay in control when lust/love is overpowering. Great writing.

MasterJonathan
Posted 12 Mar 2013 02:08
There are few authors on this site for which a "5" simply won't do. You are two of them! So I am giving you a "10"!

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curious3045
Posted 07 Feb 2013 05:21
Great poem! Love your sexy, se

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spearone
Posted 06 Feb 2013 23:43
Very intense! Excellent work!
cocokisses
Posted 03 Feb 2013 15:01
Sweet words expressing deep need, good work.

SydneySider
Posted 28 Jan 2013 03:41
what an incredible body of writing...the desire and need at the end, just smoking...

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Belthazor
Posted 27 Jan 2013 21:24
Wow! I love it, M!!! ;D
HK4167
Posted 27 Jan 2013 19:35
So much tension and so sexy. I love it! I wish I could give it a 10!

DLizze
Posted 27 Jan 2013 19:11
Wow! The tension in this is palpable!

Buz
Posted 27 Jan 2013 18:49
Wow! Powerful & truly excelent work!
Roxanna
Posted 27 Jan 2013 13:28
Saga, that was beautiful and very heart felt. Gave me shivers. Thanks for sharing

Poppet
Posted 27 Jan 2013 13:19
Wicked job Saga!! ♥
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:34
oh. my. goodness.
Kal-El85
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:33
You. . .are. . .awesome! A very seductive work; love it. Please keep giving us your great works.
stanstroker
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:31
surrender to my touch my tongue

Shylass
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:29
Just getting better and better. You know how to draw your reader and set them on tenterhooks for what will come next. Skillssssss...

sweet_as_candy
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:28
Saucy! Another stunning poem by a stunningly beautiful woman. Gorgeous in it's setting and seductively erotic. Bravo, my friend x
asleep
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:26
DAMN! WOW!! I LOVE your work!! "10" for sure!!

Mazza
Posted 27 Jan 2013 12:26
Love the way you set the scene and build the tension...

Very hot!!
 

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