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To feel complete.
Crystal waters lapping gently,

Upon the golden shore.

He whispers softly in my ear,

“It’s you the stars shine for.”

His fingers tickle down my spine,

As we welcome the night.

Snuggling against his body,

Drenched in the white moonlight.

“Look at the shooting star,” he says,

“My own wish has come true.

To be complete with my sweet love,

The beauty, which is you.”

My vulnerability erased,

We make love on the sands.

I surrender to his whole love,

My heart is in his hands. 

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Comments(17)


ofliliesandremains
Posted 20 Apr 2013 17:09
This was so sweet and heartwarming. Thanks for sharing.

VanGogh
Posted 20 Apr 2013 16:15
I loved "my heart in his hands" ... lovely!!

Naughtygrl73
Posted 20 Apr 2013 15:43
Soft and sweet
Kind of like you
Well done

Buz
Posted 20 Apr 2013 13:57
Really very excellent! I voted a 5.
1lush
Posted 20 Apr 2013 06:16
Wonderful poem. Very true expression of feelings.

alexmarch
Posted 19 Apr 2013 22:29
Ok...I had to read it again. And it gets better each time I read it. It is a classic love poem.

Mazza
Posted 19 Apr 2013 02:10
Oh that's just gorgeous! What a romantic, uplifting poem!


alexmarch
Posted 19 Apr 2013 00:35
Lovely! Simple and heartfelt.
HK4167
Posted 18 Apr 2013 19:59
So romantic and sweet. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt beautiful poem with us.
Ariel21
Posted 18 Apr 2013 18:05
So romantic!
cadbury13
Posted 18 Apr 2013 16:59
amazing poem. excellent work. 5+

SydneySider
Posted 18 Apr 2013 16:33
I just adore this. Beautiful emotional words from a beautiful girl...heart fluttering, soul melting stuff..*swoons*

Jayne33
Posted 18 Apr 2013 15:00
A really beautiful poem. Great work. 5+++++++

asleep
Posted 18 Apr 2013 14:50
Simple and yet oh so sweet! Thanks for posting this sweet, lovely poem.

Kal-El85
Posted 18 Apr 2013 13:32
Beautiful and full of love. . .great work.
DCUK
Posted 18 Apr 2013 11:14
A true love poem. Thanks for sharing.

Saga
Posted 18 Apr 2013 10:08
Oh this was beautiful and precious!!
 

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