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Concealed Souls

We readily took off our clothes
And opened our minds
To explore ourselves and each other
In the Lush land of non-existence
Hovering in a wasted no-man’s land
Between substance and delusion

What is authentic here?
Connections seemingly in tandem
Waiver badly when questioned or reminded
That the words are unreal
Concealing the souls beneath the facades
Our heated skins did not require fabric
As the words crossed screens and kept us warm
Failing to notice the dissembled truth
That skins were cooling and hearts never really open
Facades like the avatars, sadly lacking

When reality’s calls woke up the senses
They were whispers in the cooled air
Reminders to shake out the wishes and
Shrug off the disappointments
Touch the skin ~ it has thickened this time
The heart is bruised but will heal
Though still wistfully wishing
It was all real.

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Comments(17)

Veronika
Posted 01 Sep 2012 14:25
Very nice, I love it
John_Doe
Posted 06 May 2012 11:05
Beautifully wrote. The understanding I feel from it of from the beginning to end, and that moment inbetween of love and being with someone.
dirtyoldguy
Posted 08 Apr 2012 04:35
Heartfelt words, very well written. The line, "The heart is bruised but will heal" I am sure most can relate to. Thanks for sharing.
velvety
Posted 06 Apr 2012 18:49
depicts what seems to usually happens here...well expressed...
SecretDesire
Posted 06 Apr 2012 03:13
Brilliant writing! Thanks for sharing.
underthehood
Posted 05 Apr 2012 21:07
Amazing and honest sentiments !! Thanks for sharing. Great job.

TheDevilsWeakness
Posted 05 Apr 2012 19:53
Nicely written
beowulf69
Posted 05 Apr 2012 18:52
i really love this. i can feel every word your wrote. Awesome!
mickeyfinn1
Posted 05 Apr 2012 15:21
straight from your heart...loved it
1curiouscat
Posted 05 Apr 2012 12:19
Intense. Very well done! Thanks for sharing.
ArtMan
Posted 05 Apr 2012 07:06
I most definitely loved reading this! Great writing! 5+
PhilAnders
Posted 05 Apr 2012 02:58
Charming!

crazydiamond
Posted 05 Apr 2012 00:38
Great piece, pretty poignant.
nazhinaz
Posted 04 Apr 2012 22:05
Lovely attempt. 5

LatinSugar
Posted 04 Apr 2012 19:50
How lovely ... great work..
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 04 Apr 2012 19:24
oh my sweet friend.... wonderful.... ahh, those bruises....

Buz
Posted 04 Apr 2012 19:06
PA that is so very creative! Excellent writing! I really did enjoy that and it makes so much sense! Thanks!
 

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