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Connected

No matter the distance you are here..
Nightfall lures me to dreamland,
Knowing how much you care. 
Light beams in to wake you, 
Wanting,
I am there.

Wrapping up warm, against the cold, 
Snuggled, you are here.
Swimming naked to avoid the heat, 
Smiling,
I am near.

Resting, after my day is done, 
Thinking of you all the while, 
Working hard to finish your day, 
Imagining,
As you smile. 

Opposite in every way, 
But the connection is so strong. 
Feeling like the luckiest girl, 
As to you,
I belong.

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Comments(32)


LatinSugar
Posted 01 Feb 2013 14:43
No words sugar, just a heartbeat that skipped as such emotion is expressed in sweet verses for the Loved and Treasured One... Bravo!!
Jonkiru
Posted 30 Jan 2013 14:24
Soft, sweet and very soulfull xx
Mudpies
Posted 29 Jan 2013 12:04
Brilliantly written again
cocokisses
Posted 29 Jan 2013 04:00
Excellent poem, very romantic

billybroadband
Posted 27 Jan 2013 15:31
Very nice structure masking such sweet sentiments and strong feelings...well done, candy....

Naughtygrl73
Posted 27 Jan 2013 02:30
You big ol softy
Love this. So mantic

Buz
Posted 26 Jan 2013 21:37
This is a truly excellent poem!
HK4167
Posted 26 Jan 2013 18:11
Beautiful, sweet and lovely. It's a wonderful poem and I really enjoyed reading it.
zayante
Posted 26 Jan 2013 17:25
Exquisite . . . . love the way you write . . and your thoughts
Issaquah
Posted 26 Jan 2013 02:28
Mmmmm...fabulous! Love your depth in so few words.

PersonalAssistant
Posted 25 Jan 2013 22:54
This was wonderful! I am unable to score on my crackberry. I tried but it directs me to comment and with that 2-step, it won't allow me to submit my comment. Grrr! I just want you to know you should have an extra 5 score. I loved this.
DarkMaster
Posted 25 Jan 2013 17:50
nice solid 5
Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 25 Jan 2013 16:48
can feel the emotion, it is very well written. LOve it
BrownEyedBabyGirl89
Posted 25 Jan 2013 11:47
very sweet and lovely

Jayne33
Posted 25 Jan 2013 08:47
A beautiful written and touching poem, I enjoyed it very much. :-) x x x
SITTING
Posted 25 Jan 2013 07:49
That was a beautiful poem! I absolutely adored it!
Shanee108
Posted 25 Jan 2013 07:20
Simply LOVED this - it expresses my own feelings and relationship with my Master! i send a wish of THANKS and gratitude with a teary eyed smile!
TJRogue
Posted 25 Jan 2013 06:59
Candy, this is a beautiful, lyrical love poem that pulls at my heart strings. You bring the reader pure delight and heartfelt emotion as we revel in your bliss. Wonderful writing.
Roxanna
Posted 25 Jan 2013 04:55
Very powerful sentiments each of them heartfelt - you expressed yourself beautifully
playsit
Posted 25 Jan 2013 04:01
Nicely done. It's a great feeling to be connected to another that way and the way you express it here is beautiful.

SydneySider
Posted 25 Jan 2013 02:09
This rendered me emotionally spent. Hanging on every word, and then bam, that last verse rocked my soul and left my heart aching. A truly amazing piece, cleverly versed, from an amazing woman whom I am very fortunate to know. big sighs
PhilAnders
Posted 25 Jan 2013 01:51
Simply lovely, Candy, as are you.

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AbigailThornton
Posted 25 Jan 2013 01:19
Gorgeous sentiment; beautiful words.

Mazza
Posted 25 Jan 2013 00:15
How nice to have such a strong connection...

Lovely x
Kal-El85
Posted 24 Jan 2013 23:06
Aww! This is nice. . ."Even though we're apart, we together." Awesome sentiment.

crazydiamond
Posted 24 Jan 2013 22:50
Emotive, lovely, just like you!
etairay
Posted 24 Jan 2013 22:36
thank you lovely ..beautiful ..honest niice
nazhinaz
Posted 24 Jan 2013 22:30
"As to you, I belong". What a commitment to conclude. 5

Frank_Lee
Posted 24 Jan 2013 22:27
It's just wonderful to see poetry from you, Ms Candy. This is so beautifully expressed it's hard to imagine anyone coming away from it unaffected.
stelmaria
Posted 24 Jan 2013 21:43
Cute

Poppet
Posted 24 Jan 2013 21:06
I love it. xxx

Saga
Posted 24 Jan 2013 21:03
Pure and genuine love! I felt the true emotion behind every word.
 

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