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Constellation

you are the only one who can make me see stars


I lay on the bed

staring at

the glowing constellation,

a leftover of

a moment of pure silliness.

My mind is consumed with

thoughts of

your mouth on

the mug at breakfast,

the fork at dinner,

the glass of wine.

The end of the bed

dipping under

your knee makes my heart

race wildly,

beat with joy,

fill with giggles.

Your hand is warm

moving across

my foot and then it

caresses my ankle,

squeezes lightly,

moves up my leg.

I grab the comforter

trying to be still.

Wetness and

pulsing want

consume me as

your mouth kisses

a trail of love

and longing

up my leg.

You stop,

breathing in

my scent,

my desire,

my love for you.

Your tongue

taking that

first

tentative

taste.

My. Breath. Is. Stolen.

You are suddenly

drinking me in,

lapping me up,

consuming my very soul

until I

give you everything.

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Comments(12)

PhilAnders
Posted 29 Mar 2012 03:37
Very, very sensuous! Reading it made me see stars.
ibee
Posted 26 Mar 2012 21:02
Constellations vividly stand out, they connect the stars. Your own private milky way, that leads to the ankle, Where Else? Nothin left to steel.
nazhinaz
Posted 25 Mar 2012 08:27
What more sex filled can a poem or even a story can be. you simply superb Sugah. The best. 5

Buz
Posted 22 Mar 2012 04:52
Excellent LauraLee!
HK4167
Posted 21 Mar 2012 23:39
Such a sensual and breathtaking poem. I really enjoy reading it following all the lines imagining. Thanks for sharing it with us.
angeldust
Posted 21 Mar 2012 18:38
Devine,sensuous,so hott,I love it. Thanks for the great poems.
Mobius_NR
Posted 21 Mar 2012 17:20
Well done.
Sisyphus
Posted 21 Mar 2012 02:55
This poem moves so sensually and I like the narrow length of the lines suggesting the mouth moving to its wet destination, but for me the words in bold "my breath is stolen" stops the movement. I would have preferred it ending until/ breathlessly/I give you everything." I hope you don't mind my constructive criticism. I think the word "breathlessly" suspends the movement and creates a sense of breathlessness. Your poetry is so sensual, direct and sexually charged..also enticing. A real talent.
alexmarch
Posted 20 Mar 2012 21:18
Magic!
beowulf69
Posted 20 Mar 2012 20:14
I love it!
kaotik1
Posted 20 Mar 2012 19:57
sounds like something i like to do..

DLizze
Posted 20 Mar 2012 19:36
Fun, sexy, and loving - What's not to like?
 

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