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Dance in the Rain
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dragon_lilly

Dance in the Rain

Tough times can make love stronger
When heavy cold rain drops start
Falling from the grey cloudy sky,
We kiss and dance in the rain
Together just me and my guy.

When the dinner out we ordered
Took too long for them to prepare,
We spent the time talking together
Laughing so much we didn't care.

When the new movie we want to see
Is unfortunately completely sold out,
We leave and we hold hands tightly
Talking and kissing as we wander about.

If the hotel that we book for the night
Has only a bed that is way too small,
We will just cuddle close all night
We always make the best of it all.

When my car's tire has gone flat
And my whole day has been rough,
His hug and kiss make it all better
Because his love is always enough.

When life deals me a rough hand
And silent tears roll down my cheek,
He wipes away the tears so sweetly
Kissing me making my knees go weak.

Forgetting about my birthday
Or the date of our very first kiss,
Won't get him in too much trouble
For next year I know he won't miss.

And I know that there really will be
A next year together for him and me,
Because we have learned together
To turn problems into opportunity.

Love is not designed for the weak
Only the strongest pairs will thrive,
But if we work together I just know
That this love we found can survive.

It is easy to let yourself fall in love
When life is bright sunny weather,
But learning to dance in the rain
Is the only way to make it last forever.
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Comments(22)


Banes1
Posted 21 Apr 2014 12:00
Beautiful, very well expressed.
MollysDream
Posted 26 Feb 2014 01:56
I absolutely love your last line about dancing in the rain. There lies the essence of a truly successful and loving relationship. Sigh!
sluttracy99
Posted 25 Feb 2014 22:35
Oh my God!! You know love from the inside!!

Kal-El85
Posted 19 Jan 2014 08:06
Ain't nothin' like the real thing, baby. This was so sweet! Great job with this one.

ShyVixen
Posted 19 Jan 2014 06:28
Very sweet. A wonderful tribute to the one you love.
billybroadband
Posted 19 Jan 2014 03:28
I'm a bit of a biased reviewer, but you nailed this one. beautiful, lil.

Strangerlyd
Posted 18 Jan 2014 23:55
Beautiful...
Puppy
Posted 18 Jan 2014 20:09
Very nicely done. From the heart. Now that's what I'm talkin about
nazhinaz
Posted 18 Jan 2014 20:06
"Love is not designed for the weak". WOW.
Ajax
Posted 18 Jan 2014 19:42
Perfect Lilly, I think it's best poem i've read here on Lush thus far. Really nice work.

ChuckEPoo
Posted 18 Jan 2014 18:15
Also. Who ever gave you a 4 is an idiot!

ChuckEPoo
Posted 18 Jan 2014 18:14
Thanks. Life is exactly that. Learning to dance in the rain. Rejoicing inspite of opposition. Love is not about the good time as it is about the bad ones.

ace_of_hearts
Posted 18 Jan 2014 17:54
When the dinner out took to long and you spent the time laughing together...Now that's a memory!!! Love it Tina.

golf_nut
Posted 18 Jan 2014 17:49
Where do you find your inspiration for such lovely work? Life's journey with both its highs and lows have taught you well. You never cease to amaze me with your words. Another outstanding job. A masterpiece of love and life. BTW, one verse is particularly true. I once forgot my wife's birthday. It WILL never happen again...Jeez. Thank you Lily for such a lovey poem.
forgotten_love
Posted 18 Jan 2014 17:37
nicely done

Mysteria27
Posted 18 Jan 2014 17:22
This is a beautiful poem. I loved it and this sounds like the start to a beautiful relationship. Very beautiful writing. Lovely. 5
Aussie_kitty77
Posted 18 Jan 2014 17:06
Great poem

adagio_sabadicus
Posted 18 Jan 2014 17:06
To dance in rain on must have soul and taps on their spirit
nightranger
Posted 18 Jan 2014 16:31
great poem very well done.

Green_Man
Posted 18 Jan 2014 16:31
It sounds as if this is the real thing. Good luck and good poem.

Nightmare414
Posted 18 Jan 2014 16:29
What an amazing gift you have!!, I have hear more truth or better written truth about love and life with the one you love. 5 for sure but should be a 10

Buz
Posted 18 Jan 2014 16:21
An excellent poem and a great view of real love.
 

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