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Daydream

Dreaming of a distant lover
Closing my eyes...
Taking a nap.

A Daydream steal my thoughts...
My mind fly away on a far journey.

I open my eyes...
A jungle surrounds me.

A bright moon above my head...
Gives me pale cool light.

Standing in a clearing...
Surrounded by endless trees and bushes.

In the middle of all...
I see a small lake with clear sparkling water.

A bathing Indian beauty catch my attention...
She comes out of the water.

Her naked skin framed by her coal black long hair...
Came into my sight and show me her stunning body.

My heart skips a beat...
I know this beauty.

We hug each other...
I feel her wet naked breasts pressed on my chest.

Our lips tasting each other...
A soul mixing kiss follows.

She looks into my eyes...
My soul feels her love.

She whispers something into my ear...
I try to hear it.

A loud voice disturb my daydream...
My mind was pulled back into my daily routine.

Calling my next patient...
My thoughts blow a short goodbye kiss to my dream girl.
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Comments(17)

Mink
Posted 05 Oct 2012 14:44
Lovely poem

ShyVixen
Posted 03 Oct 2012 18:28
A beautiful expression of love and longing. Daydreaming is a splendid thing!
Peter_Pan
Posted 02 Oct 2012 20:49
I read your latest before this one. Quite a continuation. I see a pattern of love emerging with passion in your poetry. Smiles.

naughtynurse
Posted 29 Sep 2012 06:08
Beautiful poem
ArtAngel
Posted 26 Sep 2012 13:11
Well done my dear friend.. Beautiful !!!! *5 from me of course
HK4167
Posted 26 Sep 2012 09:59
It's a beauttiful poem with such sweet lovely emotions. Your feelings are well expressed. Well done!
GamerGirl10
Posted 26 Sep 2012 06:59
I agree with the comments before me--beautiful poem, 5+++ easily. I loved it!
Nikkidg3
Posted 26 Sep 2012 05:58
congratulation on your first poem it's really amazing
Helen49
Posted 26 Sep 2012 04:22
beautiful - thank-you
Weretiger
Posted 26 Sep 2012 04:19
Thank you for all this nice comments dear friends
fuzzy1954
Posted 25 Sep 2012 12:48
congrats tiger
you have the ladies swooning
asking for more
real nice poem
5+
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 25 Sep 2012 11:00
lovely....
vani348
Posted 25 Sep 2012 09:30
beautiful you expressed your longing for your lover so well and you have a my fav actor as av look forward to more of your work

Hotstuff
Posted 25 Sep 2012 08:20
A beautiful poem. Full of emotion and coming head on with reality. I loved it. Daydreams are wonderful and you expressed it well.
A high 5 from me, my friend.
stargazing
Posted 25 Sep 2012 08:14
it's beautiful, it's emotions which counts, your first attempt and it's beautiful, keep on writing tiger, don't worry about perfection

Mazza
Posted 25 Sep 2012 07:59
Nicely captured feelings but quite a lot of errors which detracted from the flow...

PersonalAssistant
Posted 25 Sep 2012 07:59
Love this line "soul mixing kiss" ... hmmmmm
 

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