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I drift though the day,
I drift through the day.
I drift and dream
My life away.

My love has left,
Gone far away 
And in my dreams
I'm with her, every day.

I dream of you, one day
Coming to find me,
Little and old
Your hair completely White.
I take you in my arms
My darling
And hold you ... very tight.

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blogger007
Posted 12 Apr 2011 12:45
Hey Regello, what a touching poem. There's some great use of rhyme and repetition for effect and the short lines give it a very lyrical quality, almost like a song. For some reason the line "I drift and dream" captivates me and its also very good use of alliteration. I like the final stanza the best and the imagery of the white hair and an old flame returning. You usually base your poems on true events so I was wondering if the case was the same here?
 

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