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Disbelief

The physical rushes of rejection and love lost
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The world spun
Uncontrollably and
Illogically

The blood drained
Feeling Numb and
Disbelief

Swallowing the lump
Of Rejection and
Shock

Breath held in
With a Shiver and
Coldness

Releasing the breath
Still Counting and
Struggling

Tears slid down
Love trails and
Ending

Releasing clenched hands
Trying to wave
Goodbye

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Sofietouchu
Posted 14 Sep 2012 03:07
Rejection. Emotion. Love lost.

MissyLuvsYa
Posted 12 Sep 2012 12:02
So very touching!!! 5+

ArtMan
Posted 12 Sep 2012 05:16
You have touched the soul of the heartache of despair. Most excellent wordsmanship, very well penned. 5+

beowulf69
Posted 11 Sep 2012 18:52
Been there before. You really got the essence of it. 5+

BelleduJour
Posted 11 Sep 2012 15:15
been there. beautifully expressed.

Buz
Posted 11 Sep 2012 04:19
Those are feeling we've all had at some time. You did a great job of capturing them in word! Excellent!

PhilAnders
Posted 11 Sep 2012 03:49
Thanks for sharing another excellent piece of work, PA.

nazhinaz
Posted 11 Sep 2012 00:17
Never say goodbye sweetie. Love lost is paradise regained. 5

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sweet_as_candy
Posted 10 Sep 2012 22:27
Oh wow, so emotional and raw. Very heartfelt. Xxx

HK4167
Posted 10 Sep 2012 22:24
Heartbreaking and painful emotions filled in this beautifully written poem. Well done!

Abbey
Posted 10 Sep 2012 21:44
Each word so perfectly chosen - a gift to be able to do that! 5+
 

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