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Don't blink

Don't blink.
I want to touch you as if time had stopped.
Don't breathe or move.

Don't scream.
It might hurt you when the whip clatch.
Don't sigh nor moan.

The feeling is said to be caught in slow motion
I could never tell.
It felt like we rushed through our emotions
Straight to heaven while searching for hell
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shexdensmore
Posted 05 Jan 2013 21:04
Is that you reading it? It was pretty good. The ambiguity really makes your mind wander on is meant.

alex999
Posted 10 May 2012 21:17
What a beautiful piece of work, CatNip!

Piquet
Posted 17 Mar 2012 06:57
Nice turns of phrase CatNip. Well Done.

Buz
Posted 15 Mar 2012 05:07
Very nice!

ArtAngel
Posted 11 Mar 2012 12:17
Sensational...audio..wow

frswriter
Posted 16 Feb 2012 12:48
Very nicely done, sounds so nice hearing you recite it.

John-doe
Posted 16 Feb 2012 04:50
very very good.... i loved it!!!!

techgoddess
Posted 04 Jul 2009 09:34
Another great poem. I enjoy the emotion your writing provokes. Well done.

Catnip
Posted 09 Jun 2009 15:10
Mm ment to write clatch :) and wooops on the spelling :) Thanks sweet thing.

SexedUp
Posted 09 Jun 2009 15:04
Fab poem! I especially love the last two lines! Two little things though, did you mean to write 'clatch'? And you've misspelt 'caught'. Sorry, I'm a sucker for grammer, other than that, great stuff! x

heartofdarkness
Posted 09 Jun 2009 12:36
I'm definately going to start reading more poetry
 

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