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Doubt
By
Saga

Doubt

You were the sweetness in her heart, the pure and untainted.

The moment it changed, it tore at her soul.
You left scars, deep, raw and unyielding.

She trusted, she believed,
That maybe she deserved this,
That maybe happiness was finally hers.

It did not last.

Moments of doubt,
Hours of tears.

She was shattered and bruised.

With the screaming on the inside,
She was fighting to stay silent.

She stood too close to the fire.
At first, she did not feel
The blinding pain burning her skin.
All she felt was numb.

Until it struck her
Like a lightening from the gods,
Thundering in her blood.

Despair filled her heart,
As she realized once again,
She was not it,
She was not the one.

Was she destined to be alone,
To lie broken and unwanted.
Hidden from the world?

A crushed rose,
Forgotten and discarded.

Would she move on?
Did she want to?

Would she mend her broken soul,
Or accept her dark fate?

Would she rise from the ashes,
Like the Phoenix,
All sins washed away?

Does she have the strength?

Her eyes close
As she feels the chill on her skin.
The fear is gripping,
But so soothing. 

Then the silence.
The calm.
The serene.

She surrenders. 

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Comments(24)


Milik_Redman
Posted 02 Jun 2013 22:46
What pain can match that which is caused by love lost? It is universal in it's touch and fiery in it's caress. It is the dragons breath and the jabberwocks bite. I would dare say it is indescribable, yet above is the proof that it can be so, and quite eloquently. A beautiful work.

scarlet
Posted 01 Jun 2013 16:16
I know I've commented before but I'm doing it again. I don't normally listen to audios because sometimes I feel it takes away. But this one packs a punch. Your words are so true and raw in their emotion that they draw the reader in to the intense situation. You make everyone experience these moments, in there own way.
Yes Ms Mad you make me cry, Bitch.

Buz
Posted 27 May 2013 19:28
A very beautiful poem, very skillfully written!
SpeedyC
Posted 27 May 2013 03:06
Another awesome poem. Every time I see a message saying that you have posted another I jump at the chance to read it because I know it is going to he just as good as the last. Once again you have not disappointed. Please PLEASE keep it up. I look forward to the next
Aletheia
Posted 26 May 2013 18:37
It's beautiful...intense and riveting.
pandadreams
Posted 26 May 2013 16:54
Incredible, as always!
Alphamagus
Posted 26 May 2013 10:41
This almost moved me to tears. Stunning! X
Piquet
Posted 26 May 2013 04:27
Like all your work Saga, this was sublimely beautiful.

SydneySider
Posted 25 May 2013 21:44
Incredible..painful..revealing..brave..what an emotional journey that was. Just beautiful once again..
HK4167
Posted 25 May 2013 21:33
So much sadness in this excellent poem...so beautifully written. Love it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Poppet
Posted 24 May 2013 12:33
Okay I read two poems back to back, both so close to how I feel a lot of the times. So, I sit here and try to type this with tears in my eyes. This really, truly hit home. Just like I said in the other comment, it’s not often I read something on Lush and expect to cry, but your poem and the last has made me twice in a row. You did a wonderful job, Saga. As I said, hit home real hard. Hugs
Americanheart
Posted 23 May 2013 21:42
Such a beautiful poem, very lovely Saga

Lisa
Posted 23 May 2013 17:46
This is beautifully written, Saga. Full of emotion, pain and some wonderful imagery. Really well done.

Tashtego
Posted 23 May 2013 16:47
As others have said, this is a beautiful poem. We can feel the despair and pain. Your disturbing, provocative ending, to borrow Shylass's words, takes us places we would rather not go. Really well done.

MasterJonathan
Posted 23 May 2013 13:54
Another great poem Saga! You always write such moving pieces.
Belthazor
Posted 23 May 2013 09:53
Beautiful and gripping, hun! Another Saga Masterpiece! I loved it. 5 isn't good enough.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 23 May 2013 08:57
my heart...

FeistyWolf1970
Posted 23 May 2013 08:41
riveting and emotional poem....excellent read and listen, thanks for sharing
nazhinaz
Posted 23 May 2013 08:19
Saga, what great passions conveyed. 5 ++

Shylass
Posted 23 May 2013 08:01
As always, you use simplicity to pour torrents of emotions through your readers. Such dark, deep words create a journey for the heart to traverse for countless hours of thought. Your writing allows us to access places we would rather not go, but with beauty leading as a light. That takes skill. Very well done.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 23 May 2013 07:27
I think I have run out of descriptive words for you. Truly stunning, you write with such incredible emotion. Your gorgeous voice brings the listener in, even further, hanging onto your every word. Simply beautiful x

asleep
Posted 23 May 2013 07:06
I can feel and relate to the sentiment you have so thoughtfully expressed. I'll "listen" when I'm able ... but this written piece is ... well ... its damn near perfect!! "5"+++

Rick

scarlet
Posted 23 May 2013 07:00
Your words need no soundtrack to feel the pain and sorrow. (but yes I did listen with the song). An amazing expression of life, love and pain. A breath taking piece.

Liz
Posted 23 May 2013 06:59
Really lovely, Saga. "She stood too close to the fire" I thought was a great line. Well done!
 

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