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Duped

Bravo to the two of you

You duped me from the start

Playing on my emotions

And toying with my heart

Shame on your new lover

Making like a concerned friend

What goes around comes around

And you’ll get yours in the end

Bullshit should be you middle name

It flows from you like a faucet

So now you are not playing the game

For her relationship you tossed it

I see you are going back to who you were

Needing someone to stroke your ego

Not meaning about getting together again

Boy that was really hitting me hard below

Your lover knew what we were trying to do

And she knew all about it from the start

She loved you at first glance & melted your heart

You could explain it thousands of way until you’re cold & blue

How could you say you still love me and make me believe it’s true?

I’m glad I can finally get this off my chest; I think you are a sucker

You gave your heart and soul to one screwed up, motherfucker.

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Comments(18)

angiegirl
Posted 03 May 2013 08:26
you take my thoughts out of my head and write them down..i love it.....i"ve been there also......great job..........love ya babes
Banes1
Posted 26 Mar 2013 13:59
You said what had to be said and now you can move on.
LOVES4PLAY
Posted 26 Nov 2012 15:27
IT NEEDED SAYING
again straight to the point..
A beautiful slam

JOAN YOU ARE AMAZING
chgolf
Posted 04 Nov 2012 02:44
This is first class

Buz
Posted 27 Oct 2012 20:19
Wow! Interesting and damned entertaining!!!

Princesscrazy
Posted 22 Oct 2012 15:07
Damn...not really in to poetry on Lush....but was drawn in by the pure anger and pain of your poem...powerful stuff...just WOW! Glad I was not on the receiving end...but a lesson for all who selfishly hurt others.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 19 Oct 2012 16:54
oh my!!!!
Crushinonyou
Posted 19 Oct 2012 12:15
Loved it!!! We girls deserve so much better than "one screwed up, motherfucker!" you said it the exact way it should be said! 5.

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nazhinaz
Posted 19 Oct 2012 11:48
I don't know who u talking about but strong views expressed Joan. 5
PhilAnders
Posted 19 Oct 2012 02:37
Karma? Yep!

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Gramps
Posted 18 Oct 2012 18:48
That's getting it off one's mind, off one's chest. And great lat line!
bat
Posted 18 Oct 2012 14:42
Wow what a great release ... I feel you ! thanks for sharing

tarnishedknight
Posted 18 Oct 2012 14:36
Once again you use powerful and meaningful words and expressions to send a clear and concise message.
Zamm
Posted 18 Oct 2012 12:47
Yep, changes for Joan. You go girl! Head up and keep movin' straight ahead!
1lush
Posted 18 Oct 2012 12:36
If your words don't put him in his place you can bet KARMA will. You got your point across Joan. A great poem!!!!!!!!!

frogprince
Posted 18 Oct 2012 11:52
I sit here luaghing. You got your revenge. Noe he is out in the cold alone and you can shut him out. It is a sweet victory. I told you he'd try to sneak back. Now you can attack and you did. It is good you let him be. Bitterness and hate don't suit a beautiful woman as you. You need true love and TLC. Thank you for this it cheered me up. ILY?
asleep
Posted 18 Oct 2012 10:51
"you gave your heart and soul to one screwed up motherfucker"

OUCH, that's gotta hurt. "10" if I could only vote twice.
rolandloops
Posted 18 Oct 2012 10:30
Wonderful read. It was full of the heat of anger. Thank you for sharing. Roland
 

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