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 I am the serpent Warmed by the heat of your sun 
 Asleep until woken
 Letting the rain into my window
 My curtains billowing, sails upon a ship
 Bound for unknown lands, each seagull
 A beacon of hope, each cloud
 A sign post, the distant shapes of mountains
 Calling to me, singing a joyous chorus
 My tongue flickering, tasting each moment
 Rubbing myself raw against you
 My rock, my anchor
 Shedding my skin, my scales glistening in the sunlight
 Coiling and uncoiling around you
 Until, where I begin
 And where you end
 Is forgotten.

 If they could see you, you say,
 And I answer with silence, my uncertain smile
 Speaking volumes
 If they could see you, this time with fire,
 My face framed, palms cool against my burning cheeks
 As I see you, dangling apples between your thighs,
 Juicy and red and sweet,
 Would they not have risked paradise as well?
 I reply with a kiss, happily surrendering innocence for knowledge
 My mouth hungering to taste the divinity of your gifts
 Your forbidden cunt, full of sin, or so I was told
 The first time I ate of your flesh,
 I opened my eyes and saw the walls of the garden for what they truly were.

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Posted 10 May 2013 19:36
Oh I really like this!
Posted 25 Jan 2012 04:05
!!! excellent !!!

Posted 30 Dec 2011 17:54
Totally outstanding poem!
Posted 23 Jun 2011 22:16
Beautiful poem. Thank you.
Posted 16 Jun 2011 22:19
Extraordinary. That's all I can say.
Posted 11 Jun 2011 19:53
If you ever thought of recording any of your work, this poem would be nice to hear I would have risked paradise for the fruits hanging upon a vine, if they tasted sweeter than a lifetime in Utopia.

Posted 24 May 2011 00:25
Lovely, dirty, romantic, wanton, it. Beautifully written.

Posted 23 May 2011 20:24
Rachel This is so telling of you, and your sensitivity. I love it!!

Posted 23 May 2011 09:38
Sexy, romantic, devoted, raw and enduring... just a few words that come to mind after reading this. I loved it! Beautiful writing, as always...

Posted 22 May 2011 22:29
love it

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