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Emptiness

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I listen to the house nothing
i might as well face it she gone
No more will I see her launching blue eyes.
Or her white hair shining
when the light hit it
no more of her smiling face
I cry because I adore.

I walked outside and gasped at
the girl across the street
It was her
No - a total stranger
my world torn apart
Nothing left
I looked down and see a creek
The water so placid
Rippling down stream.

I see her reflection
Broken by my tear drops
I cant live with out her...
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BelleduJour
Posted 11 Sep 2012 10:26
I felt your ache bella.
velvety
Posted 03 Aug 2012 19:10
Very moving sad poem...heartfelt.
John_Doe
Posted 17 Jul 2012 05:43
Such a beautiful, sad poem. Very touching to the heart, and moving. That loss is felt in your words.
etairay
Posted 08 Jul 2012 16:17
wow thank you love it ..felt it ..the affairs of the heart ..beautiful raw honest & warm
nazhinaz
Posted 06 Jul 2012 04:35
My heart goes with the saddness. 5

Milik_The_Red
Posted 05 Jul 2012 03:39
Beautiful and sad. The other, biting edge of passionate love
 

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