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Erotic Desire-First Kiss

'Erotic Desire-First kiss'

The burning desire within Mia escalates.
Flames of passion penetrates.

That which is just beyond her reach,
Here on this beautiful, exotic, tropical beach.

For Manuel, her sensual, soft body craves,
As her thoughts flow upon the waves.

She knows she must trust what's in her heart,
And let her mind and body become her navigational chart.

His heart she must retrieve,
Knowing the passion she will receive.

His provocative energy has no limits.
Mia's thoughts silence the spirits.

Doubts and promises,
Held in her mind like hostages.

Slowly he softly approaches her,
As the sunset becomes
Just a blur.

His magnetic personality,
Soothes her soul.
Becoming his lover,
Is her ultimate goal.

Ever so gently he takes her hand,
Easing her down upon the snow white sand.

His rippling muscles captivates her view, Dictating her hands to touch him.
But her sweet loving heart begins to frolic,
like winds on the tide without a whim.

Allowing her vivid
Imagination to flow.
Oh my God, she want to know,
Every desire he seeks to explore,
To be that woman he will always lovingly adore.

Her intriguing eyes,
Stare up at the skies.
Shivering with anguished bliss,
Deeply flowing into the oceanic abyss.

As flames of passion
Melts her undying admiration.
She sees thru his domineering persona,
Yielding to his temptation.

Mia's sexual body language is provocative yet pure,
Such mysterious, powerful attraction has no cure.

With a silent sigh she gasps for air,
Kissing him deeply
As his fingers softly stroked her long curly hair.

His tongue dances,
A hypnotic tune on her full sensuous lips,
With a lick and a suckle.

Softly tracing them with his fingertips.
Vulnerable and so delicate to his touch
She knows now, he wants her so much.

...To be continued.

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Posted 21 Mar 2013 07:11
...a wonderful start...gonna keep reading here!!

Posted 27 Apr 2012 10:13
That was amazing!!
Posted 06 Feb 2012 20:20
nice and thoughtful poem.
Posted 05 Feb 2012 12:55
There really is a bit of magic in a first kiss isn't there?
Posted 22 Jan 2012 09:31
excellent very good poem
Posted 29 Dec 2011 22:53
beautiful feeling flowing so wonderfully

"whatever you do or dream you can , begin it.boldness has genius and power and magic in it"
Posted 29 Dec 2011 16:33
So erotic and the words are so beautiful. I could totally feel Mia's emotions in those words.
Posted 04 Dec 2011 16:54
Very nice poem.

Posted 26 Nov 2011 20:14
very nice poem
Posted 09 Nov 2011 15:33
great writing please keep writing

Posted 03 Nov 2011 10:19
Pour it on!
Posted 18 Oct 2011 18:21
Nice erotic images of color on a tapestry of black and white... nice
Posted 16 Aug 2011 19:39
This is a beautiful depiction of romance at sunset on a beautiful tropical beach . In writing I found it a little stilted in rhyminig couplets . I feel it needs to flow more freely , never mind the rhyme . Blank verse can be poetry too , it is how the words are put together and flow , that can make it poetical .
Posted 27 Jul 2011 11:37
Wonderful - will be waiting for the next part
Posted 26 Jul 2011 11:09
Oh girl! That is a great poem! I love it!

Posted 26 Jul 2011 05:47
omg! a cliff hanger! this is your best yet. can't wait to see what's next.

Posted 26 Jul 2011 02:07
Very adventurous, ambitious writing. Enjoyed it a lot.
Posted 25 Jul 2011 19:14
Great erotic story poem!

Posted 25 Jul 2011 18:39
Totally excellent and very passionate!
Posted 25 Jul 2011 16:17
Very good!

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