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Expectations Dissipated


 I feel the urge

urge to feel you

urge to talk to you

urge to kiss you

urge to take care

urge to love

urge to feel passion

urge to desire you

desire to hold you

desire to tickle you

desire to lick you

desire to pinch you

desire to spank you

desire to suck you

desire to enter you

desire to fill you

desire to make you cum

desire to feel you squeezing

desire to hold you tight

just me and me alone

mine, as nature’s demand

mine, as emotions dictate

mine, to share passions

mine, to feel your heartbeat

mine, to smell you

mine, to tease you

mine, to please you

Mine and just mine

no one ever sharing you

feeling you, touching you

you arousing none’s passion

Just mine, just for me

but it was a dream

that never was to be

that never came true

that was meant only

to dissipate

evaporate

as it never was

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Comments(12)

hoterotica
Posted 09 Oct 2013 13:38
It's hard when possessing somebody is just within reach-and then you wake up!
MsObsession3
Posted 23 Jul 2013 10:29
Your words speak to me on an emotional ride that I seem to take everytime I allow my secret passions to come over me. When I read your words I am not seeking how well you punctuate them but their meaning, flow and how I allow you to speak to my soul. Thank you and please keep writing because I will keep reading.
HeCallsMeKitty
Posted 08 Feb 2013 08:27
Oh wow, this is brilliant. Love it 5
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 25 Apr 2012 11:47
Very nicely written Naz!

Sandrine
Posted 25 Apr 2012 09:53
Beautifully stated - alll emotions stated clearly. Lovely poem.. a "5" for you!
nazhinaz
Posted 24 Apr 2012 21:55
I did want to be repetitative. When one is unable to communicate to one's love effectively and convey the passions, one does repeat the same words and feelings in many forms, to be able to communicate effectively. I hope I did convey the reason for being repetative. But thanks to all those you did comment. Poetry is very subjective and should be taken as such. These were the feelings that made its imprint on my mind at a particular moment. Love u all.

DLizze
Posted 24 Apr 2012 18:20
I understand the effect you were going for with the repetitive use of "desire" and later, "mine", but because of the lack of punctuation, and the exceptionally short lines, I felt much of this poem's possible impact was dissipated. Exccellent sentiments, though, and good word choice.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 24 Apr 2012 17:29
naz... how bittersweet.... oh my....
AnnieLuvsToFu
Posted 24 Apr 2012 15:29
Beautiful! I loved it and felt it. 5++++
mickeyfinn1
Posted 24 Apr 2012 14:40
loved it well done!
swollen
Posted 24 Apr 2012 11:43
I felt the lack of punctuation in this piece, greatly reduced it's power of reader impact . However, I enjoyed the simplicity of words used. Well done. x
LittleSister_
Posted 24 Apr 2012 11:31
I liked that very much!
 

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