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Falling

I am about to crash, and no one wants to catch me.

They say they do, but then they go.

They ask what wrong, but don’t listen.

The path was together, now it’s apart.

They asked “What do you want?”

I told them.

I asked “did you understand?”

I was ignored.

I want to play, they do not.

I changed to be wanted, I was not.

I listen, but don’t understand.

I need to be free, I want to fly.

I want answers, not excuses.

I want control,

I get none.

I want order,

I get none.

I took the leap, where are my wings?

Please catch me, when I fall.

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Comments(17)

BrownEyedBabyGirl89
Posted 16 Mar 2013 18:44
very beautiful

SugarBaby2013
Posted 16 Mar 2013 04:39
Loved your poem.
Navin
Posted 15 Mar 2013 09:53
Powerful. So much longing.
lucy65
Posted 15 Mar 2013 07:39
Excellent Jen, when you put into words exactly what you feel you can not go wrong.
BatmanRises
Posted 14 Mar 2013 23:59
well done, loved it
alex999
Posted 14 Mar 2013 21:55
Exceptional! 5+
Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 14 Mar 2013 17:38
Loved it, definately know that feeling... wonderful poem.

beinggood
Posted 14 Mar 2013 16:33
well done a 5 in my books
Peter_Pan
Posted 14 Mar 2013 14:17
Fine job my little girl.

Poppet
Posted 14 Mar 2013 09:47
Wonderful job, I'm glad to help. c:

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janet_haney
Posted 14 Mar 2013 07:14
I loved your poem. I understand and feel the same way.
Jethro
Posted 14 Mar 2013 05:59
Great expression princess. I know the feeling.. The title sounds familiar. Lol

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nazhinaz
Posted 13 Mar 2013 23:35
Please catch me when I fall, great. Love the confidence in him. 5
HK4167
Posted 13 Mar 2013 21:58
So beautiful with so much honest raw emotions...
hornsnhalo
Posted 13 Mar 2013 19:47
I loved it!
Cinner
Posted 13 Mar 2013 18:24
You are so talented. Such open hearted feelings and raw emotions equal a fantabulous poem/ Congratulations on another great piece.

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StillUndecided
Posted 13 Mar 2013 18:16
Excellent as ever Jenny, well done
 

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