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Farewell to my Lover

It started out for me as a dream come true

He made me so very happy and never blue

We laughed and had so much fun together

But then after, his mood changed, like the weather.

Our chats were consumed by his jealousy and rage

If he had his way, I’d be like a bird, in a locked cage

He deleted all his friends when I called his bluff

Telling him he was the one in my heart wasn’t enough.

My friend's list was something he didn’t comprehend

He wanted them all gone and he be my only friend.

When I refused to succumb to all his foolishness

He walked out the door without even a goodbye kiss...

I miss the times we shared with the music blasting

Thought this love was true and would be everlasting

He said that we were “Tougher than the Rest”

So wherever you are lover, I wish you the best.

I lost my prince, my lover and my best friend

I’ll cherish all of our happy times until the end.
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Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 12 Jan 2013 15:41
your emotions were so powerful, it was a beautifully written poem and heartbreaking as well.

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LOVES4PLAY
Posted 04 Dec 2012 17:09
JONE SO SORRY TO SEE YOUR SADNESS & PAINE...IF I COULD ADD YOUR PAINE TO MY OWN I WOULD GLADLY DO SO.

WHILE NOT ALL OF ARE FRIENDS, THERE IS NOT ONE AMONG THE LIVING THAT WISHES YOU ANY HARM
fuzie
Posted 03 Dec 2012 11:17
beautiful.
Veronika
Posted 30 Nov 2012 22:43
Very touching...emotional... Love it
TJRogue
Posted 28 Nov 2012 12:40
Joan, words fail me as I try to respond to your heartbreak. This poem is tragically beautiful. And my heart goes out to you

Saga
Posted 27 Nov 2012 21:53
Thank you so much for sharing this very powerful and raw poem. Hugs!

Buz
Posted 27 Nov 2012 15:20
Excellent heartfelt writing Joan!
shado786
Posted 27 Nov 2012 14:15
his loss.he missed out on a gud thing .jealous bastard
1lush
Posted 27 Nov 2012 07:39
Pain only makes you stronger, and I know being a independent woman with your will be a great help for you. You always pen such meaningful poems.

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ramrod32784
Posted 26 Nov 2012 11:55
excellent as always I expect nothing less from Hot Stuff
PhilAnders
Posted 26 Nov 2012 03:41
Joan, superlative, as always.
bill11
Posted 25 Nov 2012 16:55
Joan, am sure putting your feelings to words helped. Feel so much of you in the words

tarnishedknight
Posted 25 Nov 2012 15:41
As you know Joan, writing is therapy for the soul. It is good to get it out of your system and to move on... hopefully your future will hold more mature and more stable companions.
redman2r
Posted 25 Nov 2012 12:45
Good job. Now you can forget him and move on to find a prince that can be confident in your love and share you with the rest of us!
Gramps
Posted 25 Nov 2012 12:10
Moving and emotional. And "beautiful" too; you, as you said, were moving forward to today - The First Day of the Rest of Your Life!

Now like Jonathan Livingston Seagull, be that bird who flies free, not your caged bird.
Sadman
Posted 25 Nov 2012 11:29
Wow Girl, strong words baby! you are amaizing writter, congratulations, I understand you. 5+
slickman
Posted 25 Nov 2012 08:51
oooh Joan,damm!!! My heart bleeds for you.Oh and thank you for keeping your friends!!, Slicky
nazhinaz
Posted 25 Nov 2012 04:24
Joan. If this is true, I am so sad for you. My heart goes out to reach you in the distress. But I still feel how good natured you are that you still call him your prince. Wish you do get a loving friend who is tolerent too. 5

midnightraider61
Posted 24 Nov 2012 22:38
Joan, if we were boyfriend and girlfriend I would hug you and let you release all your emotions. From here, all I can do is cyberhug you and listen to you. But there is one thing I can tell you ... you taught me the true meaning of love.
asleep
Posted 24 Nov 2012 20:56
a short, succinct summary...well stated as usual..."5"+++

ily, Rick
rolandloops
Posted 24 Nov 2012 19:58
Lovely poem Joan. The structure of your rhyme & meter was fair, but more important was the strength your feelings and emotions. The writing came across full of the sorrow of parting and remembrance of good times past. I hope that over time you can add a line or two about moving forward with hope and courage to better times.
Roland
Kal-El85
Posted 24 Nov 2012 19:35
Lovely, but heartbreaking. . .felt the pain of this word-play.
Makavelli
Posted 24 Nov 2012 19:10
AWESOME!!!

frogprince
Posted 24 Nov 2012 18:30
Oh joanie, my heart cries for you. You are too wonderful a lady to be treated this way. Think of me tickling you and smile sweetheart. I am here to make you smile. What can I do. I know we are many miles apart, but my heart is with you. I love your writing and cherish my tribute from you. You are too sweet a lady to have a broken heart. ILY Mr frogptinge hopping to you
Peter_Pan
Posted 24 Nov 2012 18:26
It is lovely and well spoken. I hope I was not part of the pain you have suffered. Healing will be hard. Help is offered by many, I am sure.
 

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