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You needed so much more than I could ever be.
You stole my thoughts and turned them into words.

My pain was so real, your voice went unheard.

You needed so much more than I could ever be.

My damaged heart longed to remain free.

You held me too tightly and like sand in your fist I gently blew away.

My cocoon was stopping my growth, my metamorphosis was incomplete. 

You were a beautiful pollenating flower withering in Spring's infinite heat.

My wings expanded and a butterfly emerged; confident, inquisitive, ready for the world to see.

"Farewell," I shouted.

And your reply was, "Looks like our love was not meant to be."

@2012 Writingvixen

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Posted 12 Apr 2014 08:20
So beautiful and yet sad. Hope you write again soon. Our hearts feel the rhythm.
Posted 17 Sep 2012 10:50
Very nice... touching... 5/5
Posted 14 Sep 2012 17:10
Beautifully written...
Posted 30 Jun 2012 00:32
You write beautifully - I am looking forward to reading the rest that you have written. I am certain they will be as well written as this.

Posted 03 Apr 2012 12:22
Beautifully written imagery written straight from the heart. It's great you were able to break free of your cacoon and fly away.
Posted 28 Mar 2012 12:56
Very nicely written girl.
Posted 27 Mar 2012 05:26
A beautifully written poem, offering thoughts of pain below the surface and breaking free to fly away

Posted 27 Mar 2012 05:24
Totally excellent!
Posted 26 Mar 2012 21:53
it is hard to be a butterfly.... well done...

Posted 26 Mar 2012 21:48
Bravo, stand tall and step firm moving always forward. Lovely piece.
Posted 26 Mar 2012 21:31
wonderfully imagistic....once again makes me sad...and i read it once again...well done...
Posted 26 Mar 2012 21:12
Beautiful, confident with your own sky. Very nicely done.
Posted 26 Mar 2012 21:00
Gentle, strong, beautifully written as ever, disguises a deeper pain methinks?
Posted 26 Mar 2012 20:54
Well done amiga ♥

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