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First Love

I meet the love of my life
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When I was young, I met a girl
Of beauty beyond compare,
Tip tilted nose, sparkling eyes
And silken dark brown hair.

We met in the beautiful garden
Of my home at Hayford Hall,
Among flowering Rhododendrons
By the sound of a waterfall.

It was Spring and all was beautiful,
The garden, to the moorland high above
I looked into her smiling face
And knew, I was in love.

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Piquet
Posted 24 Jul 2012 00:33
Very evocatice and lyrical David. I agree, rhyming every second line gives the piece a slower, more dignified and stately tone. Well Done.

blogger007
Posted 04 Apr 2011 10:52
-So simple and so smooth, I love this poem Regello! The use of only 2 rhymes per 4 lines helps to not make it sing-song in rhythm and therefore more mature, and the simplicity of language is contrasted with the vividness of the imagery of gardens, waterfalls, flowers, and moorlands. It takes me back to reading some of my favorite Romantic poets (not poets who wrote of romance but nature, like Wordsworth or Keats) and it really evokes both pure love and love of literature. Heck, this could have been written 200 years ago! -I confess that I like this one even better than your previous two and I hope to read more soon!

SouthernJim
Posted 07 Mar 2011 07:42
Very good and thank you for sharing...it brought back a few memories for me from my first love

Regello77
Posted 06 Mar 2011 22:27
Thank you both so much , I am greatly encouraged . It is lovely to share one's tenderest thoughts with friends who appreciate .

SweetPenny
Posted 06 Mar 2011 19:57
beautiful
 

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