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for maddie

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I look into your eyes and you see right through my soul,
Knowing that you'll be here when it's windy, when it's cold
Every moment that we share is frozen in time,
To see, to need, to feel you so tender is sublime.

I'll tell you so you'll know it , cause sometimes I don't show it,
Ran out of words to say just what I've found.
I'll say this so you'll know it, for times when I don't show it,
I hope that you will always be around.
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Banes1
Posted 22 Apr 2013 20:06
Stirs up a lot of feelings. Beautifully said.

frogprince
Posted 25 Oct 2012 11:55
What a tribute. Maddie had a great impact on your life. You are stunned by her. You are trying to stop time so you can keep her there. Your life stands still when she appears. Well written words well chosen to show how you feel. Lovely sentiment.
HK4167
Posted 05 Aug 2012 14:18
Sweet and lovely poem with heartfelt emotions. Great work!
bill11
Posted 04 Aug 2012 05:36
Very heart filled

beinggood
Posted 03 Aug 2012 01:55
i so felt it..a 5

adele
Posted 06 Jul 2012 10:41
Beautiful!
shelley2013
Posted 06 Jul 2012 10:03
Very sweet poem!! Kinda makes me emotional.
Angie57
Posted 06 Jul 2012 09:08
THanks for all the lovely comments Will try to write again but this one wrote itself. Love you maddie
velvety
Posted 06 Jul 2012 07:14
Short but emotions were well conveyed. Beautiful.
EroticElegance
Posted 05 Jul 2012 21:24
From the heart, beautiful Angie! That's where it counts the most! Well done!
etairay
Posted 04 Jul 2012 16:02
wow thank you love it ..felt it ..special & dear ..lovely
stargazing
Posted 04 Jul 2012 08:13
very beautiful emotions...

Saga
Posted 04 Jul 2012 04:50
I am not often speechless..... but I am now I am just going to sit here and cry of joy for a bit....... and read this over and over.
SpeedyC
Posted 04 Jul 2012 02:24
Love it
nazhinaz
Posted 04 Jul 2012 01:54
Short but with emotions.

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StillUndecided
Posted 04 Jul 2012 01:14
Love it.
 

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