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For your eyes only

This is my very first poem. Constructive comments are welcome.
Saturday morning I wake up with a spinning head,
System failures and urgent meetings in office until 2am last night.
Family, work, mortgage payment, laptop bag,
My typical middle class mainstream life.

One click on the mouse I get into lush site,
A fantasy land where I can escape and don’t need to hide.
A new email brings me a wonderful surprise,
All of sudden I feel like in paradise.

Like an angel you show up in my sight,
Sent me a private gallery just for my eyes.
You said sometimes you’re wild but sometimes you’re shy,
So please respect and don’t show it to other guys.

You’re stunning gorgeous as I had imagined in my head,
But it’s your sweetness and trust that blow my mind.
I want to cross all the distance to hold you tight,
Give you my promise and steal a kiss on your forehead.

You give me your trust and I give you mine,
If you like you can check my profile tonight.
A new private album has just been set,
Only to be shared with my closest online valentine.

In my album you will find an ordinary guy.
I’m not George Clooney nor am I Brad,
I’m not handsome and I’m also a little shy.
But at least now you know,
I’m not just another faceless fake guy.

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Comments(14)


Mysteria27
Posted 14 Sep 2013 03:48
Beautiful poem. You can feel your passion. Very poignant. Lovely. 5
velvety
Posted 21 Jun 2012 07:29
What a great job for a first attempt...
Fistmehard
Posted 19 Jun 2012 03:32
I love this my darling. Beautiful.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 07 Jun 2012 04:45
Perfect Very sweet x

ShyVixen
Posted 27 Feb 2012 18:15
Refreshing! Very sweet and honest. Great job Brian!
ArtMan
Posted 27 Feb 2012 18:05
Great writing!
Iszofia
Posted 21 Feb 2012 06:33
That is really sweet!

Naughtygrl73
Posted 16 Feb 2012 23:17
made me smile,

LatinSugar
Posted 20 Dec 2011 16:59
Brian..the finest words are those that spill from the heart...Excellent..
MexicanGoddess
Posted 17 Dec 2011 22:37
♥ IT!

Buz
Posted 15 Dec 2011 05:14
A very good job of writing.
diamondpearl
Posted 14 Dec 2011 23:33
Love the honesty of your words. Well written and very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 14 Dec 2011 12:24
very nice & sweet
SecretDesire
Posted 14 Dec 2011 11:35
Beautiful & Sweet.... made me smile the moment I began to read....
 

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