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Foundation

Going through the motions,
with no ending in sight.
One looks toward the heavens,
in the hope for insight.

The sun rays cast down,
as the earth hesitates.
It struggles, it breaks,
Yes, ... even making mistakes.

Wait, start over,
holding the line.
Achieving the outcome,
that becomes one's in time.

Remember to nourish,
shelter and love.
This is the foundation,
for what you feel deprived of.

If taken for granted,
one could be left all alone.
You need to work on this together,
not on one's own.

So, if you wonder what happened,
what could have been.
Did you listen ... Have compassion?
You need that from within.

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sexcapades
Posted 17 Mar 2013 06:02
Very nice Meg
John_Doe
Posted 10 May 2012 02:52
Another wonderful and emotional poem. The line that captured me was "If taken for granted, one could be left alone" which I feel so much personally. Have such a beautiful way for describing feelings.
lightheart
Posted 04 Jan 2012 01:03
"let the beauty we love become the good we do"

you paint with words and they come out in form of poerty
EroticElegance
Posted 27 Dec 2011 06:05
Beautifully written, Maggie! Thank you for reminding all of us, that true "Foundation" is what holds together Life, itself!
HK4167
Posted 17 Dec 2011 21:38
Beautiful and lots of emotion.
ArtMan
Posted 05 Dec 2011 19:50
This is most excellent!

Buz
Posted 06 Sep 2011 04:36
This is beautifully written!
nazhinaz
Posted 25 Jul 2011 09:13
compassion,You need that from within.Sure, we need compassion from within and that comes from the emtions of love. Humanity is based on love & love alone.
1curiouscat
Posted 14 Jul 2011 08:41
outstanding. very well done. You really have IT for poem writing... anxiously waiting the next ones...
closeddoors
Posted 24 May 2011 18:06
Beautiful. I loved it

facsuper
Posted 18 May 2011 10:10
Maggie Very beautiful poem, thank you
sprite
Posted 18 May 2011 08:59
I'm not sure how i missed this when it was published. so lyrical and beautiful and very very sweet. wonderful words of wisdom.
skip2951
Posted 15 May 2011 11:14
great poem....wise beyond your years
fsharp
Posted 18 Apr 2011 21:40
these would be great song lyrics. tune up that mandolin!
lovely_lady
Posted 01 Apr 2011 20:36
A wonderful read
Unlaw
Posted 28 Mar 2011 22:37
Meggie,

very beautiful poem, thank you...

Dudealicious
Posted 23 Mar 2011 05:08
Meg, outstanding job, you are an amazing poet! Please keep them coming. I love the honesty and emotion!

She
Posted 22 Mar 2011 09:06
I loved it! A good foundation is key to everything, nothing without it can be successful. Thanks for reminding me
Sw33tAng3l
Posted 21 Mar 2011 03:00
amazing job angelheart! please keep writing.
tommie
Posted 20 Mar 2011 21:18
Yep, when things get difficult you have to look at the foundation to not lose sight of it all, or lose it completely. Great job, twinkles. Hope you write some more.
jacobport
Posted 20 Mar 2011 12:04
Great job again meggie!
Magical_felix
Posted 20 Mar 2011 11:40
It takes a certain type of insight and heart to write something like this. I liked it, good job angelheart.

Dancing_Doll
Posted 20 Mar 2011 11:39
Loved it... building the foundation for what is to come can be both challenging and rewarding. You captured the sentiment perfectly.
 

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