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Fragmented, Too

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Alone, empty.
Apart, void.
Separately, fragmented.
Individually, nothing.
Not thinking, not feeling, not caring, just...existing.
Existing, yes, but in the basest sense — not truly being.

Together, we are no longer empty, void, fragmented.
We are replete.
We are meaningful.
We are whole.
Together, we are everything.
Together, we are.
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Comments(21)


CurlyGirly
Posted 16 Feb 2013 11:25
Some of the best things come in small packages. Very well done!

HK4167
Posted 03 May 2012 21:33
It's really really beautifully written. Wonderful piece.

stephanie
Posted 25 Jan 2012 20:52
Deceptively simple..... I liked it very much! XX Steph

Iszofia
Posted 02 Jan 2012 08:32
U can re read & re read it and each time it evokes different emotions. Eloquently written. Well Done!

She
Posted 04 Dec 2011 11:57
You should write more often something out of your field...excellent writing! Cannot stand cheesy rhymes and you've done so great with this one, really great poem!!

1curiouscat
Posted 02 Dec 2011 09:09
Really well put together... Very nicely done!

LadyX
Posted 02 Dec 2011 08:58
thanks, Maggie, I really enjoy that.

SITTING
Posted 01 Dec 2011 07:49
God, somehow i was put off when i saw how short it was but this was great. And i really mean that. The 'Together we ARE' was just so beautiful. I loved it, i really did.

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DirtyMartini
Posted 30 Nov 2011 15:59
I have to admit I like Mr. Knight's comment "For a poem, that was not bad"...obviously the man took lessons in flattery...you know sometimes you can judge the success of a piece by the quality of the comments it generates, and in this case you're an unqualified success...and yeah, you couldn't have done it alone...

sprite
Posted 30 Nov 2011 08:07
i find it's hard to write something that, with just a few words, says so much. somehow, you managed. extraordinary.

Fugly
Posted 30 Nov 2011 05:01
I hate leaving comments as I never know what to write that others before me haven't already conveyed, so all I will say is 'Loved it!'

TopThis
Posted 29 Nov 2011 18:32
Very nice!

ArtMan
Posted 29 Nov 2011 16:58
Very nicely done!

Catnip
Posted 29 Nov 2011 15:58
This is a poem that would fit very well in a paperback, lying on the night stand. Once in a while it'd be read and remind the people out there what it's all about. I can fit this poem not only to a relationship between two, but the humanity itself.

ibee
Posted 29 Nov 2011 15:21
We Like! TY

Princess4Jim
Posted 29 Nov 2011 15:10
Wow hun, that was beautiful. I Love it!

DLizze
Posted 29 Nov 2011 13:58
I like it, and I like that it closes on a positive note, rather than a negative one. From the title, I was so afraid it was going to be another "downer", that went the other way.

Pixie
Posted 29 Nov 2011 13:26
Simple and powerful at the same time.

GemGeekett
Posted 29 Nov 2011 12:52
Love the sentiment of this. Simple, elegant, eloquent.

Dudealicious
Posted 29 Nov 2011 12:35
Very powerful use of "we" much like Yahtzee had mentioned. Nice work Maggie!

mercianknight
Posted 29 Nov 2011 12:35
For a poem, that was not bad. Thanks.
 

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