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Fuck You

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Fuck You

Fuck you with your glinting eyes
That hold me e’er spellbound.
Fuck you with your cool disdain
On which I run aground.

Fuck you for your curling lips
That sneer each phrase they spit.
Fuck you for the words you say
And those you do omit.

Fuck you and your roaming hands
That stroke the air, not me.
Fuck you and that world we shared
Now naught but old debris.

Fuck your still abiding presence
That stalks my every day.
Fuck those undying memories
I can’t quite shut away.

Fuck you with your friendship
Those messages you send.
Fuck your expectation
That I might be your friend.

Fuck you for the nervousness
I feel each time you’re there.
Fuck you and my desperate need
My obsession to declare.

Fuck your fickle caresses
That tantalise my skin.
Fuck your teasing, seductive words
That cause my head to spin.

Fuck the tense uncertainty
That clouds our ritual dance.
Fuck those bruised and battered hearts
So fearful of romance.

Fuck the way my heart does pound
Each time you do appear.
Do you know my resistance
Is but a thin veneer?

So fuck me as I should be fucked
Ecstatic bodies intertwined.
Please take possession once again
Of me; body, soul and mind.

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Posted 31 Oct 2013 17:50
That was really good. A real tension between the vulgarity of the fuck you and the beautiful (if bitter) lines that come after. There is real feeling in this. I like the perfect meter too.
Posted 11 Jun 2013 13:00
Loved it! Great portrayal of conflicting emotions and lust.

Posted 10 Jun 2013 13:24
Posted 07 Jun 2013 08:04
Very well written MS Cumgirl Love it !!

Posted 26 Apr 2013 20:40
I absolutely love this. All I can say is: fuck you and your killer verse...

Posted 12 Oct 2012 01:57
I adore this
Posted 25 Aug 2012 20:14
Nicely done. I loved the language and the ultimate submission. i wish I could vote on it.

Posted 24 Aug 2012 12:22
Not been into poems before but this has some impact
Posted 16 Jul 2012 16:43
This writing makes the reader feel your emotions. I think that must be perfection then.

Posted 02 Jul 2012 06:34
Sometimes I think your poems may be more like tiny monuments to the experience of the human heart. This is one of those times.
Posted 28 May 2012 15:13
Finely crafted x
Posted 28 May 2012 06:59
Excellent poetic erotica!
Posted 27 May 2012 23:38
Oh so good...loved intense!

Posted 27 May 2012 02:55
Jesus that was good! Loved it!
Posted 27 May 2012 01:55
This is an amazing powerful poem that is filled with passion, keen perceptions, rage, love, need and honesty. The rhymes are perfect and the poem moves so intensely to its inevitable are so talented and knowing.
Posted 25 May 2012 10:49
I love it!
Posted 25 May 2012 01:26
Fucking fabulous! :-)

Posted 24 May 2012 17:55
Hate and love, viciously intertwined... I LOVE it.
Posted 24 May 2012 17:35
Raw and so wildly lustful. You make 'Fuck You' sound so fucking good! Loved it.

Posted 24 May 2012 15:20
Great poem...liked it a lot.
Posted 24 May 2012 13:07
Damn...that kinda covers all the bases..
Posted 24 May 2012 11:44
Perfect!!! In the beginning it reminded me of and adult version of the poem in 10 things I hate about you, but it went so far beyond that as it progressed.
Posted 24 May 2012 10:58
What a beautiful descriptive of "fuck you" for so many variations and also for the expresion of hating his not responding you.

Posted 24 May 2012 10:42
Raw passion demanding aggressive sex... love it!
Posted 24 May 2012 10:36
Grinds its way perfectly to its fucking conclusion. A fine snapshot of love in the raw.
Posted 24 May 2012 10:28
I love it.
Posted 24 May 2012 10:23
my favorite of yours that isn't a sonnet

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