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Gasp Out Loud

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It is in the wee hours of the morning

In that moment before waking

When the world is blissfully silent

And the whole universe turns on a sigh

That I dream of you...

Your hand as it reaches for me

The brush of your fingertips against my brow

The supple touch of your lips against

The corner of my mouth

I inhale as you inhale

And smile

The sweet caress of indrawn breath

Across my skin

As you nuzzle your nose into my neck

I dream...

Of the tender smile that precedes

Your tongue dancing over my collar bone

Your hand that slides, searching

Across burning, naked flesh

And your fingertips that pluck at my knotted bud

My arching spine

And trembling body 

As your wicked mouth

Torments my lips with your lips

And I

Gasp out loud

As I try to smother your breath

With my heated core

That is as wet as water

And yearning for you to slip

The essence of all you are

Inside me

I dream of the nails

That rake across the ghost of my soul

As you fill me again and again

With the proof of your love

And I waken with

The cry of your name in my heart

My always

My forever

My love...

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Comments(14)

playsit
Posted 25 Jun 2012 12:40
Sweet and erotic. I love the way you express yourself.
ArtMan
Posted 29 Apr 2012 11:47
Really very nice.

Buz
Posted 26 Apr 2012 05:38
This is excellent!
beowulf69
Posted 25 Apr 2012 19:04
real nice.
mickeyfinn1
Posted 16 Apr 2012 15:22
Erotic ,intimate HOT and sparks the imagination.....love it!
capemay4u
Posted 16 Apr 2012 12:08
mmmm...very sensual and erotic..I loved it, 5
HK4167
Posted 16 Apr 2012 09:52
Breathtaking piece. It's such a captivating poem.
CeliaisAliena
Posted 16 Apr 2012 09:34
It begins with a breathy, whispery quality that somehow sustains itself, even as the senses become inflamed with feverish pace as the lovemaking heats up. Intimate, secretive, and erotic.

Michael
Posted 16 Apr 2012 08:37
I read this last night and I loved it so... I wanted to comment but couldn't.
I return now to add my accolades to your beautiful poem.
Each phrase creates a mental image and that image is so...
Sensuous.
PhilAnders
Posted 16 Apr 2012 01:23
Lovely!
Sisyphus
Posted 16 Apr 2012 01:19
This is music, the movement, the sounds, the rhythm is so sweet and sensual. The "ghost of my soul" and taking place in a dream feels so real it takes me to the twilight zone. The words "and I gasp out loud" is perfectly placed and feels like you are there.....vey inspired writing.

DLizze
Posted 15 Apr 2012 21:08
What a breath of fresh air it is, to be able to read something so achingly beautiful and loving as this. Thank you.

Frank_Lee
Posted 15 Apr 2012 17:39
This is heart stoppingly beautiful and intense and erotic and...jeezus...I don't think I've even come close to writing a poem, yet. Please, Little Sis, keep giving us examples like this to go by.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 15 Apr 2012 17:38
this. is. the. best. one. yet.

oh little sister.... i want to write like you.... you made me feel every moment...
 

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