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Girl, Will You Marry Me?

This was actually a quick song idea, and it won the monthly contest over on Poetry Craze, btw...:)
We’ve been together for so long,
And I think the time is right,
Something I just need to ask you girl,
And I need to know tonight.

So much has changed for me,
Since you came into my life,
I need you so much, you see,
And I want you for my wife.

So girl, will you marry me?
As I’m down here on my knees,
It’s with you that I want to be,
I’m asking you baby, please.

I never thought I’d find someone,
As sweet and kind as you,
Someone I can love so much,
And loves me so much too.

So many years I’d been alone,
Without someone to care,
And when I finally did find love,
It was like an answer to a prayer.

So girl, will you marry me?
As I’m down here on my knees,
I need you so much you see,
I’m asking you baby, please.

I’ll have to say, the joy you’ve brought,
Has made my heart sing,
And my heart would sing a joyous song,
If you would wear my ring.

And we could spend our lives as one,
Until our dying day,
I just need an answer from you,
Just answer when I say.

So girl, will you marry me?
As I’m down here on my knees,
It’s with you that I want to be,
I’m asking you baby, please.

09-05-11.
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Comments(9)


sweet_as_candy
Posted 31 Aug 2012 22:32
Beautiful! Very romantic Another 5 from me x
playsit
Posted 28 Feb 2012 04:33
Nice lyrics DM. Not sure I agree with the comments about setting it to country, but I agree with them about the content. Thanks for sharing.

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Naughtygrl73
Posted 28 Feb 2012 02:25
that would be a big ol YES from me
SecretDesire
Posted 25 Oct 2011 00:58
Brilliant writing and definitely very romantic..... 5.
Princess4Jim
Posted 24 Oct 2011 19:24
Wow, that was so amazing Alan. Good Job. Vote a 5 from me (:

ShyVixen
Posted 24 Oct 2011 16:59
I will!! So sweet and thoughtful, I could envision this happening. Well Done.

Buz
Posted 24 Oct 2011 16:22
Awesome. And definitely if its is romantic it needs to be country music.

Michael
Posted 24 Oct 2011 12:15
I like it, but I love it with a smooth county rhythm.
IC_n_2U
Posted 24 Oct 2011 12:13
Sounds to needy ... Just kidding!! well written great flow
 

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