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Gone
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Alphamagus

Gone

Tags: loss, longing
A man laments his lost love.
The colour has gone from everything.
The days are grey. The birds don’t sing.

The swallows have stopped their northern flight.
The moon has shrouded her peaceful light.

The stars have blinked out one by one.
There is no magnificence from the sun.

The minstrel plays a mournful tune,
Its despair ringing through the gloom.

There is no peace, no hope, no love.
The night’s enwrapped me in her glove.

The dancers pull up, unsure on their feet.
The thieves now steal, the cheaters cheat.

Babies cry. The clowns they weep. 
More lemmings make their fateful leap.

The farms are ruined, no crops to tend.
The rain has come, and will not end.

Chaos rules, its presence sure.
Plague knocks on each and every door.

They all seem to know.They are aware.
That you have gone, no longer there.

My heart raised up as a bloodied prize,
To cheer up their ravenous eyes.

But without you here, why should I care?
Let them have their broken fare.

For without your love, no sun can be,
Ever shining again for me.

Goodbye, my love, run free! Run fast!
May all your wishes come to pass.

May your life be long. May your heart now smile.
May your love last for a long, long while.

May you sing and dance and laugh with glee.
Please do not worry about me.

I will stay right here and search the light,
Happy knowing that you are alright.

But if you ever again start to fall,
Or are alone with nobody to see or call.

Just look into the darkest point you see,
And there waiting patiently will be me.
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Comments(10)

SweetElle
Posted 24 Mar 2013 21:59
This brought a tear to my eye...you put such feeling in your words.
Piquet
Posted 15 Mar 2013 23:23
Great ryhthm and flow of images. Great to see a poet concerned with structure, punctuation and rhyme. Well Done.
PhareDuFour
Posted 26 Jan 2013 14:34
I re-read this thrice listening to the Bergamasque Suite. It fit so well together, your words, that tune.

principessa
Posted 14 Jan 2013 05:40
Superb. Beautiful words and strong emotions. Loving does not stop.
HK4167
Posted 13 Jan 2013 10:57
Such a beautiful poem with honest sad emotions. Well done!
swollen
Posted 13 Jan 2013 05:59
Perfect.

Michael
Posted 12 Jan 2013 13:13
Although you have indeed captured the lover's lament, it is perhaps best you have also captured the hope of loves return.
Bravo!!!
Kiki
Posted 12 Jan 2013 12:38
Holy Mac hun!! This is absolutely stunning!! God you are good at this... The sound, words & flow still resonate... I will be back to read this. A new fave! X

LatinSugar
Posted 12 Jan 2013 10:53
This is so bloody heartfelt is just...goodness Alpha...this is superb.
Emotion flows from every verse, shivers that ease the thoughts of those that have lost.... Bravo!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 12 Jan 2013 09:22
beautiful.... so wonderful!
 

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