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Goodbye, Louise....

She's leaving home, bye-bye.....


"Goodbye, Louise...."

(By Stephanie)

If you were my lover I’d leap,
If you were a secret I would keep you,
If you were a party I’d dance on the table,
If you were a medicine I’d read the label…

If you were a prophet I’d preach,
And if you were lost I would reach you,
If you were a rollercoaster I would ride you,
If you were Miss Muffet I’d sit down beside You...

If you were a poison I think I might drink you,
If you were a thought I could simply not think you,
If you were a dream I’d awake and I’d cry,
If you were not you then I think I might die,

Now you say you’re leaving and my tears now blind me,
I’m cast to a place no one will ever find me,
But I simply smile and I kiss you,
For you’ll never know how I’ll miss you…

 Goodbye, Louise.

(Stephanie don’t just write stroke…)

Xx S

(Goodbye, F.L.R...)

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Saga
Posted 10 Jan 2013 05:27
Lovely .....

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crazydiamond
Posted 19 Feb 2012 02:12
ahh yes, that was exceptional, i do love a good lyric. Some really poignant lines there Stephanie! Loved it.
smiler77
Posted 13 Jul 2011 02:07
Awesome!! you put me to shame! x

She
Posted 05 May 2011 06:18
I believe that Madonna's one song is Power of Goodbye, and how right she is. Letting go, is sometimes most difficult thing to do but when we do it! Oh boy, what a feeling
BrotherOz
Posted 12 Mar 2011 19:36
Hate to be an echo, but it was indeed well written. Very touching.
Gspot19
Posted 11 Mar 2011 19:11
Very sweet. Totally agree with the melogy comments. Would love to hear that as a song.
HardEric25
Posted 10 Mar 2011 21:28
Wow! Totally agree with the melody comments too! Love to read another one! Well done this one should go far
AngelHeart01
Posted 10 Mar 2011 18:14
WOW .. YOU!!! I love it. Ashley is right .. it has a melody going on. Hope you write some more poetry .. along with those stories of yours.
lovely_lady
Posted 10 Mar 2011 17:48
Loved it

stephanie
Posted 10 Mar 2011 16:36
There is actually a Melody, Dancing Doll..... It's Yours if you want to play with it..... (Not Copywrited, this one!!!!!) xx SF

Dancing_Doll
Posted 10 Mar 2011 15:56
Loved it... this would actually make a great song. As I was reading it, I had a bit of a melody playing in my mind on acoustic guitar.
Irishgirl
Posted 10 Mar 2011 14:52
Lovely piece, very touching and nicely done as always dearest.

Mwah xx
 

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