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Goodbye My Love

Where did you go?
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Where did you go?

The chatty, fun woman.

The one with whom I fell in love.

The one that felt, truly, like “the one”.

The one who showed me love,

showed me her tender side.

All that is left now, is thorns.

No roses, no sun.

You make me want to run

away from you.

I can't, I love you.

It's toxic, this love.

I want it. I know I shouldn't

but you showed me affection

like some wouldn't

I know I shouldn't.

We have nothing in common.

We share everything.

We used to, at least.

Now we don't even share...

You, I felt I loved you

perhaps it's all a fallacy.

Maybe love is fake

maybe it's at the bottom of the lake.

Goodbye, my love.

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Jinxy
Posted 27 Feb 2013 20:57
You did a great job, this was sad and can feel the hurt.

blazestcyr
Posted 21 Jul 2012 09:51
just simply fabulous

jollylolly
Posted 21 Jul 2012 06:17
Better than i imagined even, i loved hearing your words in your voice!!!

kaikai012
Posted 16 Jul 2012 19:10
it

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 16 Jul 2012 18:54
well oh my... i think i love you... more audio please...

Shylass
Posted 16 Jul 2012 18:06
You HAVE to read your stories out too.

SecretDesire
Posted 15 Jul 2012 08:02
Very beautiful. It’s hard to forget someone who gave you so much to remember… Thanks for sharing.

velvety
Posted 13 Jul 2012 18:18
You have beautifully conveyed the pain...i can feel it.

etairay
Posted 09 Jul 2012 16:26
wow thank you love it ..hurt questions & seekin ..beautiful

jollylolly
Posted 09 Jul 2012 06:11
Ah sweetie, you wrote a beautiful poem here. I hope it was cathartic. And I really love the last few lines.

mimsbim
Posted 08 Jul 2012 21:57
I feel it running through my veins

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 08 Jul 2012 19:53
oh my.... i feel it with you... horribly beautiful indeed....

Shylass
Posted 08 Jul 2012 19:20
You captured that torment between the death of a relationship and the pain before it fades. Horribly beautiful, lad. I know that hurt.
 

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