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Goodbye my Love

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A man reluctantly leaves his lover
Goodbye my love, I'm leaving, I'll be gone when you arise.

Your perfect form still sleeping, tears now in my eyes.

Your body still breathtaking, as your breasts gently rise and fall.

My tongue will no longer be tasting you, my love, my life, my all.

We met when you were hurting, I fell quickly, and fell deep.

Your intellect and elegance, made me take the leap.

I thought that I knew love before, You showed me my mistake.

You invaded every thought I had, whether sleeping or awake.

You astounded me then daily, Our laughter flowing free.

And then as we became closer, your body opened up to me.

Our lovemaking exquisite, we came and came and came.

We'd fall asleep and eat a little, and then we'd come again.

Our bodies in perfect harmony. Our juices together mixed.

Your happiness returning, your heart was nearly fixed.

But as you realised your beauty, and regained your confidence again,

The list of suitors started growing, slowly driving me insane.

You lapped up all their flirting, it made you feel good once more, inside.

But my heart it started breaking and my soul it gently died.

And although my love for you is constant. it will never go away,

I know that I must leave you although I really want to stay.

But I could not live with the resentment, If I ever made you choose.

My love too pure, too sacred. Your love I would rather lose.

They will all love you as I have, but I can't play second best.

My heart has been slowly dying, and now he needs a rest.

But I know that you are happy, Your spark has lit again.

And no matter where I am my darling, my love will stay the same.

So forgive me please my darling, for leaving, but you know, 

That the best way I can show my love to you is by sadly letting go.

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Comments(19)


daddysweetheart
Posted 14 Dec 2013 00:27
omg..wonderful..and gorgeous...your poetry is truly exquisite and heartbreaking.. have been there too as well. thank you..
MysteryBaby
Posted 21 Oct 2013 19:21
Filled with emotion beautiful yet you can feel the pain as you read it

Saga
Posted 11 Jul 2013 23:10
Beautiful yet painful to read.

HoneyBee000
Posted 24 Mar 2013 09:43
Love it - grrrrrr you men always leave when us women think your here to stay, such heartbreak is love! xxx
velvety
Posted 12 Jul 2012 01:40
Excellently expressed...your words captured the exact feelings of letting go of someone you love.

Jayne33
Posted 04 Jul 2012 04:35
It took my on a journey of emotions, really well written, I loved it.
Kiki
Posted 24 Jun 2012 14:47
Beautifully written, letting go the hardest thing to do but sometimes it is the only option to move forward...
eagerone
Posted 04 May 2012 03:05
Hauntingly beautiful...
XxPrimalGoddessxX
Posted 02 May 2012 20:01
Excellent
LittleSister_
Posted 01 May 2012 03:03
Truly beautiful though heart wrenching! A superb job Alpha
mickeyfinn1
Posted 23 Mar 2012 00:48
Full of emotion and spoken from your sore heart
ArtMan
Posted 12 Mar 2012 13:03
Most excellent!

stephanie
Posted 12 Mar 2012 09:09
We've all been there.... Few have expressed that feeling so eloquently. A 5. xx Steph
HK4167
Posted 11 Mar 2012 23:22
Raw and intense, filled with emotions. Great work.
writingvixen
Posted 11 Mar 2012 17:57
Such a beautiful poem. It really made me think about letting someone go. Thank you for capturing the feelings in my heart with your words.
swollen
Posted 11 Mar 2012 07:10
This has so much poignancy Alpha, it seems so very heartfelt too. Lovely words, don't stop them flowing. X

LatinSugar
Posted 11 Mar 2012 06:14
Your words are so intensely sad yet with a tender gentle and caring expression. Such a beautiful and forgiving heart you possess.

crazydiamond
Posted 11 Mar 2012 06:06
Wow, that was beautifully painful. So emotive. x
nazhinaz
Posted 11 Mar 2012 05:51
Good way to show respect & yet love her. Excellent emotions but lack proper & appropriate poetic form.
 

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