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Hate to Love

Tags: hate, love
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I hate you

You get on my nerves
That you think I deserve


When you put me through sorrow
Pierce my heart with an arrow

Poison my thoughts

I want to think clear
But do you see this tear


Rolling down my cheek
It's not because I'm weak


Despite all your flaws
I'm clutching at straws

Don't you see?

Even if I wanted to 
I couldn't let go of you


You have my heart in your hand
It's not something I planned

It just is

So don't ever let go
Because you and I know

I love you

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Posted 21 Apr 2011 23:16
Great flow and so much emotion in such few words. Beautiful.
Posted 23 Dec 2010 14:22
to quote Ms Van G .. 'how many words did you need to convey to us something amazing?? not many!! a true genius with the language'....a very well deserved 5..awesome stuff T
Posted 22 Dec 2010 19:16
i felt that same way b 4
Posted 22 Dec 2010 15:47
wow. no, really, wow.

Posted 22 Dec 2010 10:04
Tommie .... seriously?! Why do you even question yourself? I really, really like this one. A LOT! You always make me proud of what you do .. everything you do. xx twinkles xx
Posted 22 Dec 2010 00:22
thats really deep tommie i wish i had a lover who could write like you that was incredible much luv hun

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