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He is my Master

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Master, You are who I so look up to

Master, You are who I melt for every day

Master, You are who I kneel in front of

eyes downward

Seeing in front of me, your greatest gift to me

your hardness excites me Sir

Your kind eyes looking at me

that can turn to steel in a fraction of a second

making my tummy excited

my red bottom squirm

wanting only to please you, my Master

Our hearts blend to one

our hands clasp together

Our love is now and forever

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Comments(33)

Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 08 Apr 2013 22:40
You can really feel the devotion you have to your master.. Well done
SirChameleon
Posted 04 Apr 2013 10:29
Nicely done, a good tribute
thepunisher
Posted 24 Mar 2013 23:49
It was nice how the words flowed, and expressed sincerity.

SugarBaby2013
Posted 10 Mar 2013 19:52
Beautiful! Just like you!

MasterJonathan
Posted 10 Mar 2013 05:01
Excellent work beinggood. I can tell you have a deep love for your Master. You do Him proud here.
Haineko
Posted 09 Mar 2013 19:00
kitten can feel the love you have for Sir and it made her heart swell reading it.


Perfect
Jethro
Posted 05 Mar 2013 15:01
I agree with zina. Your devotion jumps off the page. Nice job

Zina
Posted 23 Jul 2012 22:12
My dear sis, well written. Even though the master, slave thing isn't for me, I could feel your devotion in the words of your poem.
wking
Posted 15 Jul 2012 13:37
Its very beautiful
slickman
Posted 14 Jul 2012 22:58
well written and lucky master!! Slicky
SouthernJim
Posted 11 Jul 2012 16:48
Very well done Hon...showing your love and submission at the same time.
Paddler
Posted 04 Jul 2012 23:24
Very nice, my friend.
I like the line where you kneel, eyes downcast. This epitomizes the D/S relationship.
SweetKing126
Posted 04 Jul 2012 03:16
Great emotion, and with the emotion comes great sexiness. This poem is a gift to any and all Masters and Mistresses.
notlooking5
Posted 03 Jul 2012 08:26
I am impressed with your ability to show and express your feeling for your master. .So well done
facsuper
Posted 03 Jul 2012 08:22
Sweet and touching
Fugly
Posted 02 Jul 2012 19:15
Do I really have to leave a comment??? Because really, there is nothing I can say that hasn't already been said - so I will stick with the boring, well done and a well deserved 5, love you
etairay
Posted 02 Jul 2012 17:45
wow thank you love it ..beautiful honest desire admiration & love ..lovely my dear

PersonalAssistant
Posted 02 Jul 2012 11:28
the greatest gift is being able to convey your emotions with few words .... and this has great impact.
Wdawg
Posted 02 Jul 2012 10:51
well expressed. best wishes always Princess
mimsbim
Posted 02 Jul 2012 09:23
love it...
ddubya
Posted 02 Jul 2012 05:52
Excellent
Mobius_NR
Posted 02 Jul 2012 05:08
Yours was a well-crafted bit of verse, B.G. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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nazhinaz
Posted 01 Jul 2012 22:47
Nice. Love sentiments.
Navin
Posted 01 Jul 2012 22:16
Heartfelt and well written. Well done.

beinggood
Posted 01 Jul 2012 22:03
Thank you all for your kindness...BG
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 01 Jul 2012 21:46
how lovely...
olderthandirt
Posted 01 Jul 2012 21:34
Red Dragon is truly lucky to have you Love ya
easy_rider75
Posted 01 Jul 2012 21:23
Your master is a lucky one for sure
GabrielSweet
Posted 01 Jul 2012 21:20
Your devotion is very touching and wonderfully expressed
HK4167
Posted 01 Jul 2012 21:09
Such a sweet and lovely poem. Nicely done.
manofdesire
Posted 01 Jul 2012 20:33
Very well writen and very heartfelt. great job sis loved it.
Timidlittlebabe
Posted 01 Jul 2012 20:29
So sweet and incredible.
Red_Dragon
Posted 01 Jul 2012 20:15
The greatest gift to a Master is when his slave feels this towards him thanks for showing the world what true submission means
 

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