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Heart
By
Saga

Heart

A tidal wave of sorrow
Was drowning my heart, 
A heart stitched together 
With fragile thread.

I had been left shattered,
Bruised and broken,
Falling to my knees
In the unforgiving sand.

You found me lost and wandering
In the mist of twilight.
You claimed my heart
And devoured my soul.

Like a forbidden fruit, 
You tempted me.

With reckless abandon, 
I gave in. 

You are what I want,
What I need.
You are before me...

To love.

To lust.

To crave.

A heart that was once slowing
Is now beating strong.
A soul that was once quietly fading
Is now burning like the midnight sun.

You reached for my hand…

But you claimed my heart.

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Comments(29)


Milik_Redman
Posted 22 Jun 2013 10:51
The best poems are the ones you desire to read again and again. That is why this one is joining my list of favorites. Magnificent. You are a better poet than I, and I do not easily admit that.
Piquet
Posted 25 Apr 2013 00:34
The serene dignity of your voice lends this poem a timelessness and a profound beauty - beautiful work, beautifully performed.

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alexmarch
Posted 19 Apr 2013 23:59
Lovely. Incredible. Very direct. Something to read over and over again.
2706ali
Posted 16 Apr 2013 06:42
To read once is not enough,to read again is to feel your words come alive as you wanted us to let them express your sentiments Beautiful !!!
Coco
Posted 10 Apr 2013 17:19
Thought provoking and beautiful, excellent work.
stanstroker
Posted 10 Apr 2013 05:29
you amaze me
kisses hard deep kisses
Michael
Posted 10 Apr 2013 04:45
I thought your poem was unraveling, yet the last words brought it all together with endearing beauty.
ShyRedRose
Posted 09 Apr 2013 23:37
Fantastic! x
bill11
Posted 09 Apr 2013 14:38
Sure enjoyed the poem and it's feelings

sweet_as_candy
Posted 09 Apr 2013 13:39
OMG! Just beautiful! You get better and better M. Sensational stuff! So heartfelt Gorgeous poem by a gorgeous woman xx
Americanheart
Posted 08 Apr 2013 19:20
very beautiful

Buz
Posted 08 Apr 2013 19:06
This is an excellent piece of writing! Great poem!
SpeedyC
Posted 08 Apr 2013 12:03
Saga once again you have crafted an excellent Poe.please keep them coming
Guille
Posted 08 Apr 2013 09:27
Another fabulous piece of work!
Freesia
Posted 08 Apr 2013 08:02
Emotive and beautifully written. You have a talent for capturing all of those raw emotions and putting them into words.

Liz
Posted 08 Apr 2013 07:20
"But you claimed my heart." - Really lovely 5 from me.
Elling50
Posted 08 Apr 2013 07:17
Beautiful poem

Mazza
Posted 08 Apr 2013 06:43
Lovely poem... Nice, healing and uplifting

Lisa
Posted 08 Apr 2013 05:58
What a beautiful poem, Saga. The last two lines were my favourite.

SydneySider
Posted 07 Apr 2013 23:05
talk about stripping your heart and soul and baring it all..This is exactly what you have done..Superb as always..
nazhinaz
Posted 07 Apr 2013 22:33
WOW: "You reached for my hand, But you claimed my heart" Great. 5

Tashtego
Posted 07 Apr 2013 21:19
What a beautiful mixture of love, pain, and sensuality. I agree with the others. 5 is just not enough.

Kal-El85
Posted 07 Apr 2013 20:57
Amazing as always, *Saga*. Written beautifully and full of heart.
Belthazor
Posted 07 Apr 2013 20:54
This is completely beyond amazing, M! I love it!!!

SweetKing126
Posted 07 Apr 2013 20:50
There is only really one word for this poem, but not even that word does it justice. It is absolutely beautiful in so many aspects.

asleep
Posted 07 Apr 2013 20:22
Saga...I read this and am at a loss for words. Excellent job, as always. "5"+++ just isn't enough.

Rick
HK4167
Posted 07 Apr 2013 19:56
Your words are beautiful, and your emotions are deep. It's an excellent poem. I wish I could give it a 10.
Jinxy
Posted 07 Apr 2013 19:29
Great job, Saga. It caught my attention right away. To see someone on the mists of nothing, and pulled back is always great, magical to see.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 07 Apr 2013 19:28
how utterly lovely
 

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