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Her Perfection

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She doesn't see what I see.
She only sees her flaws.
This is too big.
That is too small.
It's all just nonsense to me.

She's always too hard on herself.
Trying to quell the pain inside.
Hiding silently like a wounded bird.
Resting, trying to find the strength to fly.
It's the yearning hurt that she feels
that makes me want to hold her, to comfort her.

Her angel face.
Her caring eyes.
Her silky hair.
All working in unison to make me melt.

All I see is her perfection.
That is all I will ever see.

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Poppet
Posted 06 Nov 2012 19:56
So pretty! Such a beautiful way with words

♥Poppet
Lady_Lollipop
Posted 01 Nov 2011 15:26
Aw! Simple, but so heartfelt.
Darknlovely
Posted 16 Jun 2011 20:42
Wow very sweet. Thank you for that
Espresso
Posted 13 Jun 2011 14:19
Absolutely gorgeous Navin! I think this will touch many hearts among the female population because this describes so many of us. Hopefully the men who loves us feel as you do! Thank you sweetie!
AngelHeart01
Posted 18 May 2011 05:32
Perfection .. Beautiful how you see it.
Marina
Posted 17 May 2011 15:44
Very loving~Marina
Briar_Rose
Posted 17 May 2011 07:24
Simply beautiful. Kiki is right. She is a very lucky woman.
unicorn92
Posted 17 May 2011 01:36
love it a lot

She
Posted 17 May 2011 00:42
Beautiful, just beautiful. With your simple words you told us everything. Thank you for reminding me what really is important.

TracyAmes
Posted 16 May 2011 23:56
Beautiful, just beautiful.
justinebaby
Posted 16 May 2011 19:19
beautiful words "Her angel face. Her caring eyes. Her silky hair. All working in unison to make me melt." loved this
 

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