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Holding Your Hand Tight

I dedicate this poem to my dear wife Dreammy on this Valentine’s day
It’s that time of the year again
Materialized love fills the mall 
‘Chocolate, flower or diamond?’ 
The sales man asks 
‘It’s time to shower her with your love.’

Beyond those fancy gifts
A simple sign is all we seek 
To remind ourselves that 
There is still romance between us 
In our tiresome routine chores

Once upon a time I had a broken heart
Until a girl gave me her hand 
In February I sent her a crystal rose pin 
The only jewelry that I could afford

A decade has passed since that Valentine’s Day
Now I call that girl my dear wife 
Each day we’re preoccupied with 
Mortgage, bills and 401K 
Just like any other ordinary family

The life is neither smooth nor easy
Argument and compromise always along the way 
But no matter how tough it is 
We will never forget that windy day 
The first time our hands touched 
And we are still holding on tight 

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MissyLuvsYa
Posted 04 Mar 2013 19:12
This is wonderful!!!

Naughtygrl73
Posted 23 Feb 2013 03:54
reading this I can see the love you hold for your Dreammy,
a sweet look into the complex emotion that is love

velvety
Posted 18 Feb 2013 05:47
Pure expression of true love. Very sweet...God bless you both.

Jayne33
Posted 18 Feb 2013 04:23
Such a beautiful poem, so true, it tugged at my heart. Great Work, easy 5+++ x x x

Buz
Posted 17 Feb 2013 19:30
Really very nice & romantic!

LatinSugar
Posted 13 Feb 2013 20:09
Alright..just this..you are so damn cool..a true gem. Thank goodness that real love still prevails through thick and thin... Kudos buddy.

MexicanGoddess
Posted 13 Feb 2013 17:50
Loved it

asleep
Posted 13 Feb 2013 06:33
Hold on tight to that gal...the journey has only just begun!! As Joan said below..."High 5 to the both of you!"

Rick

beinggood
Posted 13 Feb 2013 02:13
well said my friend..I so loved the feeling of your love for your wife..Its a huge 5..hugggs

stargazing
Posted 12 Feb 2013 22:55
i loved a lot...a raw feeling and emotions....i wish happiness and lots love to you and to dreammy...be happy always and in love....

float with her in world of love and passion and smiles...

Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 12 Feb 2013 21:31
lovely poem full of romance

Saga
Posted 12 Feb 2013 20:39
So sweet and romantic and genuine! Well done my friend!

Peter_Pan
Posted 12 Feb 2013 19:39
Lovely. Quite lovely.

ShyVixen
Posted 12 Feb 2013 19:30
Such a lovely dedication to the one you love. Happy Valentines Day to a couple who are truly blessed. xoxoxo

JasonMarak
Posted 12 Feb 2013 17:49
Very touching.
I like how you didn't fall in line with the common poem style by forcing rhyme out of that reason. You may have lost much in this if you had gone for rhyme instead of emotion.
The emotion does a fine job of supporting this by itself.

kaikai012
Posted 12 Feb 2013 17:27
What a wonderful poem filled with love..Very Romantic..Happy Valentines Day to both of you!

Hotstuff
Posted 12 Feb 2013 17:14
What a beautiful poem, dedicated to your wife, on Valentine's day. You are very fortunate to have found each other. Wishing you many more Valentine Day's together.

High 5 to the both of you!
 

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