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Attempting to appear strong
Standing straight and tall

Appearing to remain strong

My friends think I am doing fine

They can't see the loss I feel

The emptiness within

The part of me that she ripped out

Without a word of goodbye

Clueless as to why

Putting on a brave face

Unsure for how much longer I can

I may look sturdy on the outside

But there is a gaping hole inside

I am

HolloW

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Comments(15)

Desires
Posted 17 Jan 2014 15:03
Plushbunny
Posted 10 Jan 2014 14:28
Big hug. Beautifully written.
Jinxy
Posted 09 Jan 2014 16:25
I think a lotta people know how dis feels. Oh my friend, I want to give u hugs.
elizabethblack
Posted 09 Jan 2014 08:59
This is heart breaking. I had to pick this one to read first to find out about you. It is a 5++++

Tranquil
Posted 02 Jan 2014 01:30
Hugs
girlie4280
Posted 01 Jan 2014 17:45
Beautiful poem ...

Aussie_kitty77
Posted 01 Jan 2014 16:14
Beautiful written emotional poem, well done
hornsnhalo
Posted 01 Jan 2014 15:18
Great job guy, sad though. I'm sure a few feel like this....

daddysweetheart
Posted 01 Jan 2014 09:36
Very beautiful and sad...
5 stars
J_Fae
Posted 01 Jan 2014 07:37
So very very sad

asleep
Posted 01 Jan 2014 06:11
You write painfully well. I hope things improve. Be strong my friend. "5"+++

Rick

buttercup2u
Posted 01 Jan 2014 04:38
Painful, beautiful, expressive!

Mysteria27
Posted 01 Jan 2014 04:08
This is very emotional poem. I am sorry that this has happened. Time heals all wounds and you will heal. Lovely and beautiful poem. Very intense. 5

Strangerlyd
Posted 01 Jan 2014 04:01
, To be alone is not nice at all, yet beautiful writing...
Secsi
Posted 01 Jan 2014 03:35
Beautiful words, portrays the hurt and loneliness to a T.
 

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