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Hopelessly in Love

Saturate me in your resonance and

Render me speechless.

Fill me with longing and

Render me motionless.

Take away my ability to sigh and

Render me breathless.

Capture my heart and

Render me helpless.

Do all this and let the flood tide roll

The dam burst open

The emotion like a tidal wave

Pouring out to drown me in its intensity

At the intensity you possess

Dropping me into that dark, still night

The connection alive and strong

The hesitant pause, the breath

Just breathe... in your presence

Where I hide my face behind my hands

And you steal the blush from my skin

Where I bury my head into my elbow

And you coax the smile from my lips

An age apart ... a world

A tiny worry of another life

The small doubt that tweaks at the mind

A dark twitch inside as

The universe

Giving a double edged gift

The gilt shard ... sharp and piercing

Like cupids arrow

Bringing us together

Only to keep us apart

A Fate so cruel

As our souls ache

And dream of moonlit cliffs

Redolent with unfolding petals

Of fragrant lust

And dancing eyes

Of ghostly visits

In the dead of night

To catch my fleeing form

And caress the line

Of my clenching jaw

Then you, only you...always you,

Forever you, can

Render me senseless

And hopelessly

In love...

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Comments(12)

ScottFord
Posted 08 Apr 2012 16:35
Very beutiful. Just like you.
SecretDesire
Posted 06 Apr 2012 12:17
Very beautiful.... Lot of emotions. Well done and thanks for sharing.
capemay4u
Posted 06 Apr 2012 03:33
simply a powerful loving poem
angeldust
Posted 05 Apr 2012 15:36
Wonderful simply wonderful
PhilAnders
Posted 29 Mar 2012 02:45
Wonderful, LittleSister!!!!

I rendered it a 5 because but only because that's the most allowed.

crazydiamond
Posted 29 Mar 2012 02:27
Outstanding! So powerful, so beautiful.
John_Doe
Posted 29 Mar 2012 02:06
Really wonderful and powerful poem. Lovely written and deserving of a 5 rating.

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nazhinaz
Posted 28 Mar 2012 22:31
Lovely poem, the begining is so enchanting. Wish I could kiss the lips and hands that write such emotions. 5

DLizze
Posted 28 Mar 2012 22:30
I read this three times. Each time, I found myself holding my breath, becasue it is so powerfully emotional. Any superlatives I could offer seem hollow and paltry by comparison.
HK4167
Posted 28 Mar 2012 22:05
Wonderful poem filled with intense emotions. Well done.

Frank_Lee
Posted 28 Mar 2012 22:02
This is stunning. I wish I knew a more adequate word, but your poem has rendered me at a complete loss. Incredibly powerful.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 28 Mar 2012 21:53
little sister, you. are. the. best.... i love this... lord i know that dark twitch in the universe... that feeling.. wonderful, dear one...
 

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