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How Can I Stop My Heart From Feeling

How can I stop my heart from feeling?

When it’s broken and on the road to healing

Yet it’s still able to remember every single emotion

That ebbs and flows everyday like an ocean

I wish I could remove it and send it out for repair

Would that erase everything and show that I don’t care?

My heart is going through some major conflict

With all this new technology isn’t there a simple trick?

I’m trying to move forward and not look back

But it seems my heart keeps falling off the track

I’m trying really hard to do my very best

Is this another one of life’s meaningful test?

I always try living my life by the “Golden Rule”

But if others don’t you come out looking like a fool

I guess time will tell which path I should choose

Right now I don’t have any answers or clues

They say, “Good things happen to those who wait”

Please make it soon and not at the “Pearly Gate.”
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Comments(29)

DaisyDo
Posted 04 May 2013 08:08
Not a poem person, but beautiful!

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Banes1
Posted 26 Mar 2013 20:30
Brought a tear to my eye. That was powerful.
ravenpearl
Posted 02 Mar 2013 18:45
oh wow ,,,amazing.

blazestcyr
Posted 07 Feb 2013 07:00
teared up reading this..for you nailed it...that feeling...that exact feeling and that is why you are a fabulous writer...wow!
slickman
Posted 02 Feb 2013 09:15
aww Joan!! I am here for you,so you can just relax now,and enjoy the ride Your friend Slicky
pinklipgloss70
Posted 02 Feb 2013 07:40
Beautifully expressed..I do enjoy all your poems..you are truly gifted.
HK4167
Posted 29 Jan 2013 21:45
Your intense emotions are very well expressed in this beautiful poem. I can read your heartbreaking struggle among the lines. Well done!
TJRogue
Posted 29 Jan 2013 11:31
You are an original Joan and so is your work. Thanks for sharing your creativity and artistry with us. And thanks even more for sharing your heart and emotions with us.
PhilAnders
Posted 29 Jan 2013 03:55
Almost, but not quite, as hot as its author. :-)
nazhinaz
Posted 28 Jan 2013 21:09
Beautiful. 5
Roxanna
Posted 28 Jan 2013 19:52
Every line brought more shivers. So beautiffully expressed. So honest and raw. Loved that you shared.

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LOVES4PLAY
Posted 28 Jan 2013 18:48
Joan you are not alone, nor are you unloved..as shown in most of the preceding comments..With your heart & emotions naked before us we feel your pain & suffering .Time heals , THE HEART CAN HEAL.
My pain is gone, after charting with Jolene / Punz... Pick a friend you really trust, whether its on site or in real LIFE..
As usual this is a FIVE. Very powerful and moving.. Joel

Buz
Posted 28 Jan 2013 18:13
Great heartfelt writing! A very touching poem!
ArtMan
Posted 28 Jan 2013 16:04
Wonderful!!!
SylviaK
Posted 28 Jan 2013 16:03
Wonderfully expressive!
HoldenMcCrank
Posted 28 Jan 2013 15:08
Joan those of us that know you, love you. You are who you are because of your feelings good and bad. Anyone of us would gladly take away your pain if we could. As we know you would do the same for us if you could. Smile and know that you are on your way to aceing this test. Holden
Kal-El85
Posted 28 Jan 2013 14:57
Beautiful; a truly heartfelt work.
AvaMarie
Posted 28 Jan 2013 14:43
Very beautiful, I can really understand your feelings. Lovely x
Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 28 Jan 2013 13:21
you convey your emotions so well. it touches my heart
bill11
Posted 28 Jan 2013 13:15
I hear your tears in the written words, and feel,your pain. I can only think that vocalizing it will help you deal with the issue.
rolandloops
Posted 28 Jan 2013 12:23
I really liked this poem. Good use of vocabulary. It's easy to see how you poured your emotion into this testament to the struggle of making choices to questions with no clear outcomes.
ready4
Posted 28 Jan 2013 10:17
thank you for sharing your feelings

Jayne33
Posted 28 Jan 2013 09:47
This touches on something similar to what I am going through, and you expressed the feeling so well. Really great work. 5+++

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frogprince
Posted 28 Jan 2013 09:23
What a plea, for love and kindness. Your lament is felt by us as we read. The heart is hard to fix. It is best to distract it with the love from your friends. There those of us out here who will let you rest your head on our shoulder and put a loving arm around you and support you for as long as you need. Just call on us. ily
1lush
Posted 28 Jan 2013 08:47
Great use of words you truely have a gift. You are the greatest Joan.
Jethro
Posted 28 Jan 2013 08:34
Joan you do a tremendous job of making us feel what you feel inside. Your ability to do that overwhelms me. Don't ever stop your heart from feeling my friend. The healing will come from somewhere. ily
Peter_Pan
Posted 28 Jan 2013 08:33
Honest to god, you have the goods, dear. But I so wish I was privy to the backstory. Maybe someday. Great stuff
asleep
Posted 28 Jan 2013 08:32
THAT is the big question a lot of your friends have. You have a well worded piece and have expressed yourself well. I wish you the VERY BEST in life. ily

Rick
Gramps
Posted 28 Jan 2013 08:32
Oh, I love reading this poem; read it twice. Nice lilt as I read it fast - then more slowly to feel the meaning.
 

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