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Hurt Words
By
scarlet

Hurt Words

If he were to know what would he say...
I thought of you today.
First time in a while,
I’m sorry to say
But I finally thought today

I looked for you
And found you had gone
No words, nothing.
It was silly to expect more.

But I still find myself
Thinking of our chats
And 'that'
But also the hurt.

I find myself wishing,
Praying almost
That less words had been said...
That I had hidden some things from you.

But would that have been true?
I had a lover
And it wasn’t you.
What more was there to say?

But I found myself
Thinking back
Wondering if it would help
If I said I fell in love?

That man that I left you for
I love him,
Honestly and completely,
In all the ways you loved me.

But your curse continues
He doesn’t love me.
I’m sure you would say
That is what I deserve.

Would you take joy in
My love wretched soul
Joining those in hell?
Would you?

Or would you take pity,
Where I didn’t
And just rip it out
Completely?

I wondered today, if
We had continued
Where would we be.
Sitting together?

Or fighting more.
For these questions
I will get no reply,
You will never know,

Your hurtful words worked.
I will never forgive myself.
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Comments(26)


SydneySider
Posted 30 Jun 2013 05:06
a truly beautiful and open passage...and I loved the audio..
knobby
Posted 07 May 2013 23:00
Simply heart wrenching.

Poppet
Posted 05 May 2013 12:36
Well pulled at my heart strings. What a powerful poem. It was sad and beautiful. Thank you.

buttercup2u
Posted 09 Jan 2013 05:24
Very well written I could feel the pain and the shame behind the words...
BabydollSlave
Posted 27 Nov 2012 08:40
wow mini momma that was amazing i read more...tots 5
beinggood
Posted 21 Sep 2012 11:43
awesome my friend..Again I so felt it...a 5 of course
Tammy84
Posted 04 Sep 2012 23:21
A five all the way. Wish I knew what happened to the audio...don't see a link...
kinkygirl
Posted 31 Aug 2012 05:45
Wonderful and hearing your sexy voice reading Wow
PhilAnders
Posted 30 Aug 2012 03:15
Thanks for sharing another winner, Rac.

Shylass
Posted 29 Aug 2012 17:09
Ok, I'm still woozy but i'm commenting anyway. There is beauty and depth of both anguish and growth in this.piece and you should be proud of it.

By the way, only the elite get scored a One Bomb, and that's how you know you Made it as Lush writer. There are a few who are so cool the incompetants who need to make themselves feel better bizarrely overlook them, but generally, if you get a One Bomb, you know you have a talent.
Clarkie1990
Posted 29 Aug 2012 09:12
Beautiful poem ... and the emotion in your voice only makes it all the more real... Thanks for sharing

Red_Dragon
Posted 29 Aug 2012 06:12
Well lil ghost you did again. Great job lil one, a nice piece of poetry

Saga
Posted 29 Aug 2012 05:44
So glad you did the audio, perfect voice for it!

SweetKing126
Posted 29 Aug 2012 01:56
A very touching, emotional piece of poetry which reminds me of a lost love. Excellant work !! 5+
nazhinaz
Posted 29 Aug 2012 00:29
Beauty in words and thoughts. love flowing. 5
HK4167
Posted 28 Aug 2012 21:01
Heartbreaking sorrow and pain nicely expressed in this excellent work. Well done!
SpeedyC
Posted 28 Aug 2012 20:31
Another piece of fine writing there rack. Very well done

FeistyWolf1970
Posted 28 Aug 2012 19:36
Very emotional, soulful and real, excellent poem, wonderfully written, thanks for sharing!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:49
wonderful and ringing truth... oh my.

Saga
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:43
Great Job honey!!

Kal-El85
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:25
That was so heartfelt...damn. Great job. I was moved by this.
tazznjazz
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:21
Very real feeling expressed so well!

elitfromnorth
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:18
Strong, sort of self criticism on fucking up. Doubt you'll be picked up by Bill just yet
Makavelli
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:17
I love the emotion and tone of this piece!

sexygeek
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:17
Another 5!
Navin
Posted 28 Aug 2012 15:16
Very poignant. So real and easy to relate to. Thank you.
 

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